Browse categories
Explore
Fiverr Pro
English
$
USD
I will critique your novel and literary agent query package
Jessica Ryn
Top Rated
2 orders in queue
5.0
5.0
Gig Summary
What people loved about this freelancer
lillielemon
United States
The feedback I received was very helpful for developing a solid query for agents. She also did excellent work editing the first few chapters of my manuscript,...
jalfamais
United States
Fantastic experience from start to finish. She delivered MUCH earlier than expected and provided incredibly thoughtful, detailed feedback on my query letter,...
mlabute14
United States
Working with Jessica has been exceptional. She had a lot of deep insights and a great eye for detail, no doubt from her considerable experience, that enhanced...
About this gig
If you're ready to query agents with your novel and you want your literary agent query submission package to be the best it can be, you've come to the right place.
Massive well done to you for finishing your book! It's a huge achievement.
Now comes the scary part: submitting your agent query.
I'm Jessica Ryn and I'm an agented, traditionally published author of two novels with HarperCollins, a professional editor, and a member of the EFA. I'm here to make sure that your agent query package stands out and really wows each literary agent you submit to.
You've worked so hard to write the story only YOU can tell. Let's work together to give it the best chance of being represented and published so that your book can find its way into your readers' hands and hearts.
I will provide:
- A full critique and edit of your cover letter
- A full critique and edit of your synopsis
- A full critique and edit of the first three chapters of your manuscript
- A developmental edit for the rest of your novel (optional)
- Hints and tips for agent query submissions
I currently work with fiction submissions only, and spaces fill up FAST so please send me a message first before ordering. :)
Get to know Jessica Ryn
Jessica Ryn
Freelance Editor, Author, Expert Storyteller
Top Rated
- FromUnited Kingdom
- Member sinceJun 2021
- Avg. response time1 hour
- Last delivery2 days
Languages
English
As a professional editor and agented published author with HarperCollins, I combine industry experience with expert storytelling know-how to help writers achieve their publishing dreams. I'm a member of the Editorial Freelance Association, and I have a thirst for stories. I can't wait to hear yours!
My Portfolio
FAQ
What format will I receive my edits and agent query critique in?
I will send a tracked changes word document for each element you've requested as well as a clean document with changes made for the first 3 chapters (or 12k words).
Will you give me overall feedback on my submission?
Absolutely! In addition to providing full critique and edits on each requested element, I will also give you feedback on the cohesion and clarity of your whole MS, should you opt for the full MS edit.
What if I need a critique on more than the first 3 chapters?
No worries! Send me a message, and I'll create a custom order for you that fits your needs.
Do you provide full developmental edits or line edits?
Absolutely! Please check out my other gigs, or send me a message and I can work out a custom offer that suits your needs.
Reviews
131 reviews for this Gig
| (130) | ||
| (1) | ||
| (0) | ||
| (0) | ||
| (0) |
Rating Breakdown
- Seller communication level
- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
Sort By
Most relevant
L 
lillielemon
United States
The feedback I received was very helpful for developing a solid query for agents. She also did excellent work editing the first few chapters of my manuscript, answered specific questions I had about the opening of the novel, and overall understood what I was trying to do and was able to help me with...
$200-$400
Price
3 weeks
Duration
J 
Seller's Response
Helpful?J jalfamais
United States
Fantastic experience from start to finish. She delivered MUCH earlier than expected and provided incredibly thoughtful, detailed feedback on my query letter, synopsis, and opening chapters. Her comments showed genuine care for the manuscript, and she caught numerous opportunities to improve clarity,...
$200-$400
Price
5 days
Duration
J Seller's Response
Helpful?M mlabute14
United States
Working with Jessica has been exceptional. She had a lot of deep insights and a great eye for detail, no doubt from her considerable experience, that enhanced my query letter and suggested a lot of helpful revisions for the first few chapters. I would definitely work with her again and can't recommend her highly enough.
$200-$400
Price
3 weeks
Duration
J Seller's Response
Helpful?M 
malik_jones_907
United States
Highly useful.
$200-$400
Price
3 weeks
Duration
J Seller's Response
Helpful?I isabelablc
Brazil
I adored working with Jess. Her feedback was clear, thoughtful, kind, and precise. I especially loved her inline comments and suggestions throughout the editing process. She was also very quick to respond and always available to answer my questions, which was super helpful. I had a great experience working...
$200-$400
Price
3 weeks
Duration
J Seller's Response
Helpful?
Reviews
131 reviews for this Gig
| (130) | ||
| (1) | ||
| (0) | ||
| (0) | ||
| (0) |
Rating Breakdown
- Seller communication level
- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
Sort By
Most relevant
L lillielemon
United States
The feedback I received was very helpful for developing a solid query for agents. She also did excellent work editing the first few chapters of my manuscript, answered specific questions I had about the opening of the novel, and overall understood what I was trying to do and was able to help me with...
$200-$400
Price
3 weeks
Duration
J Seller's Response
Helpful?J jalfamais
United States
Fantastic experience from start to finish. She delivered MUCH earlier than expected and provided incredibly thoughtful, detailed feedback on my query letter, synopsis, and opening chapters. Her comments showed genuine care for the manuscript, and she caught numerous opportunities to improve clarity,...
$200-$400
Price
5 days
Duration
J Seller's Response
Helpful?M mlabute14
United States
Working with Jessica has been exceptional. She had a lot of deep insights and a great eye for detail, no doubt from her considerable experience, that enhanced my query letter and suggested a lot of helpful revisions for the first few chapters. I would definitely work with her again and can't recommend her highly enough.
$200-$400
Price
3 weeks
Duration
J Seller's Response
Helpful?M malik_jones_907
United States
Highly useful.
$200-$400
Price
3 weeks
Duration
J Seller's Response
Helpful?I isabelablc
Brazil
I adored working with Jess. Her feedback was clear, thoughtful, kind, and precise. I especially loved her inline comments and suggestions throughout the editing process. She was also very quick to respond and always available to answer my questions, which was super helpful. I had a great experience working...
$200-$400
Price
3 weeks
Duration
J Seller's Response
Helpful?
