I will critique your novel and literary agent query package


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jalfamais

United States
Fantastic experience from start to finish. She delivered MUCH earlier than expected and provided incredibly thoughtful, detailed feedback on my query letter,...
pamelabloom223

United States
I came to Jess with a rough draft, asking for critique and guidance. As this is my first attempt writing an MS ,i prepared myself for any outcome. Her critique...
candicerichard

United States
Jessica worked with me to create a specialized package for my needs and did an excellent job. I am very pleased with her swift work and willingness to make...
About this gig
If you're ready to query agents with your novel and you want your literary agent query submission package to be the best it can be, you've come to the right place.
Massive well done to you for finishing your book! It's a huge achievement.
Now comes the scary part: submitting your agent query.
I'm Jessica Ryn and I'm an agented, traditionally published author of two novels with HarperCollins, a professional editor, and a member of the EFA. I'm here to make sure that your agent query package stands out and really wows each literary agent you submit to.
You've worked so hard to write the story only YOU can tell. Let's work together to give it the best chance of being represented and published so that your book can find its way into your readers' hands and hearts.
I will provide:
- A full critique and edit of your cover letter
- A full critique and edit of your synopsis
- A full critique and edit of the first three chapters of your manuscript
- A developmental edit for the rest of your novel (optional)
- Hints and tips for agent query submissions
I currently work with fiction submissions only, and spaces fill up FAST so please send me a message first before ordering. :)
Get to know Jessica Ryn
Freelance Editor, Author, Expert Storyteller
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- FromUnited Kingdom
- Member sinceJun 2021
- Avg. response time2 hours
- Last delivery1 day
Languages
English
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FAQ
What format will I receive my edits and agent query critique in?
I will send a tracked changes word document for each element you've requested as well as a clean document with changes made for the first 3 chapters (or 12k words).
Will you give me overall feedback on my submission?
Absolutely! In addition to providing full critique and edits on each requested element, I will also give you feedback on the cohesion and clarity of your whole MS, should you opt for the full MS edit.
What if I need a critique on more than the first 3 chapters?
No worries! Send me a message, and I'll create a custom order for you that fits your needs.
Do you provide full developmental edits or line edits?
Absolutely! Please check out my other gigs, or send me a message and I can work out a custom offer that suits your needs.
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J jalfamais

United States
Fantastic experience from start to finish. She delivered MUCH earlier than expected and provided incredibly thoughtful, detailed feedback on my query letter, synopsis, and opening chapters. Her comments showed genuine care for the manuscript, and she caught numerous opportunities to improve clarity,...
$200-$400
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5 days
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pamelabloom223

United States
I came to Jess with a rough draft, asking for critique and guidance. As this is my first attempt writing an MS ,i prepared myself for any outcome. Her critique will serve as my guidance moving forward to shape and round out the narrative. I consider Jess as part of my creative team and will use her services...
$200-$400
Price
4 weeks
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candicerichard

United States
Jessica worked with me to create a specialized package for my needs and did an excellent job. I am very pleased with her swift work and willingness to make things work in my time and content restraints! I recommend working with her!
$400-$600
Price
4 weeks
Duration
J 
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Helpful?L lastadventurer

United States
Exactly what I wanted! There were no questions with this delivery as everything was well explained and very detailed.
$200-$400
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3 weeks
Duration
J 
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Helpful?G garrettkopp504
Thank you for the encouragement!
$200-$400
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3 weeks
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135 reviews for this Gig
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J jalfamais

United States
Fantastic experience from start to finish. She delivered MUCH earlier than expected and provided incredibly thoughtful, detailed feedback on my query letter, synopsis, and opening chapters. Her comments showed genuine care for the manuscript, and she caught numerous opportunities to improve clarity,...
$200-$400
Price
5 days
Duration
J 
Seller's Response
Helpful?P 
pamelabloom223

United States
I came to Jess with a rough draft, asking for critique and guidance. As this is my first attempt writing an MS ,i prepared myself for any outcome. Her critique will serve as my guidance moving forward to shape and round out the narrative. I consider Jess as part of my creative team and will use her services...
$200-$400
Price
4 weeks
Duration
J 
Seller's Response
Helpful?C 
candicerichard

United States
Jessica worked with me to create a specialized package for my needs and did an excellent job. I am very pleased with her swift work and willingness to make things work in my time and content restraints! I recommend working with her!
$400-$600
Price
4 weeks
Duration
J 
Seller's Response
Helpful?L lastadventurer

United States
Exactly what I wanted! There were no questions with this delivery as everything was well explained and very detailed.
$200-$400
Price
3 weeks
Duration
J 
Seller's Response
Helpful?G garrettkopp504
Thank you for the encouragement!
$200-$400
Price
3 weeks
Duration
J 
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Helpful?

