I will provide substantive edits for your novel
Freelance Editor, Author, Expert Storyteller
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banamaki

United States
It was an absolute pleasure working with Jessica. Her attention to detail is impeccable and she was very easy to communicate with and professional. Prompt response...
williamvdn

Japan
Jessica Ryn was a pleasure to work with. She handled her work professionally and delivered far better results than I expected. She not only fixed any gramatical...
megtenuta

United States
Jessica was amazing to work with. Very professional as well as responsive. She got the job done within the timeframe and gave excellent feedback on how to improve my story. I will be hiring her again!
river_guthrie

United States
Jess did a phenomenal job editing my first book. The feedback was detailed, thoughtful, incredibly helpful, and improved the manuscript while still respecting...
jdfwhite

United Kingdom
Working with Jess has been a joy. My manuscript was over the amount listed so I requested a custom offer to edit the work. I was unsure what to expect with...
About this Gig
Massive well done for completing your draft. It's a huge accomplishment! Now comes the scary part: sharing your work.
As an agented HarperCollins author and experienced professional editor with an MA in creative writing and several editing qualifications (see FAQs), I'm here to help you achieve your publishing dreams.
Whether you're hoping to sign with a literary agent, or you're looking to publish independently, you'll want your story to be impossible to put down.
I understand how important it is to trust someone with your novel. I'll be kind, constructive and honest as we work together to make your reader say 'Just one more page!'
Developmental edits - big-picture, substantive edits for plot, structure, character development, pacing, premise, motivation, writing technique, plot holes, stakes and goals, to really grip your reader.
Line edits - refining prose for rhythm, flow and conciseness, word choice, removing redundancies/repetition, voice consistency, detail accuracy, grammar, spelling & punctuation.
I'm a full member of the Editorial Freelancers Association.
Spaces fill up FAST, so please message first to check availability and to see if we'd be a good fit.
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English
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FAQ
How will I receive my substantive edits?
I will mark up your Manuscript using tracked changes on a Microsoft Word document as well as providing full structural editorial notes for a developmental edit. For line and copy edits, I provide a 'clean' copy, with all changes made and comments removed.
Do you provide developmental edits/line and copy editing separately?
I do, but to save on cost, some writers request a comprehensive edit with all elements in the one round, so I offer this service on request.
What will the developmental edits entail?
Big-picture aspects, such as story and scene structure, character development, pacing, concept, stakes, motivation and goals, narrative technique, foreshadowing, believability, story flow - so all the story 'beats' are aligned. You will receive in-margin comments and a detailed editorial report.
What will the line edit aspect of the edit focus on?
Sentence structure and flow, the removal of redundancies and repetition, word choice, emotional temperature, voice consistency, POV issues and narrative distance, show not tell, clarity, and grammar, spelling and punctuation.
What qualifications and novel editing training have you undertaken?
Qualifications: MA in Creative Writing (Distinction) - CCCU Advanced Developmental Editing of Fiction - EFA Developmental Editing in Practice Copy-editing Fiction - EFA Editing the Romance - Club Ed Essential Grammar - The Publishing Training Centre Line Editing for Suspense - Louise Harnby
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B banamaki

United States
It was an absolute pleasure working with Jessica. Her attention to detail is impeccable and she was very easy to communicate with and professional. Prompt response times and delivery. She went above and beyond expectations and really helped polish up my manuscript. I highly recommend her services for...
$1,000-$1,500
Price
5 weeks
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Helpful?W williamvdn

Japan
Jessica Ryn was a pleasure to work with. She handled her work professionally and delivered far better results than I expected. She not only fixed any gramatical and punctuation erros but also provided plentiful, insightful feedback. I look forward to working with her again sometime in the future as well!
$1,000-$1,500
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5 weeks
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Helpful?M megtenuta

United States
Jessica was amazing to work with. Very professional as well as responsive. She got the job done within the timeframe and gave excellent feedback on how to improve my story. I will be hiring her again!
Up to $50
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12 days
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river_guthrie

United States
Jess did a phenomenal job editing my first book. The feedback was detailed, thoughtful, incredibly helpful, and improved the manuscript while still respecting my voice and vision for the story. I’m extremely happy with the work and would absolutely recommend her to other writers looking for a skilled and attentive editor.
$1,000-$1,500
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5 weeks
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Helpful?J jdfwhite

United Kingdom
Working with Jess has been a joy. My manuscript was over the amount listed so I requested a custom offer to edit the work. I was unsure what to expect with this being my first novel, and Jess took the time to explain the process, which was a relief. I received a mid-point update which calmed the nerves...
$1,000-$1,500
Price
5 weeks
Duration
J 
Seller's Response
Helpful?
265 reviews for this Gig
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B banamaki

United States
It was an absolute pleasure working with Jessica. Her attention to detail is impeccable and she was very easy to communicate with and professional. Prompt response times and delivery. She went above and beyond expectations and really helped polish up my manuscript. I highly recommend her services for...
$1,000-$1,500
Price
5 weeks
Duration
J 
Seller's Response
Helpful?W williamvdn

Japan
Jessica Ryn was a pleasure to work with. She handled her work professionally and delivered far better results than I expected. She not only fixed any gramatical and punctuation erros but also provided plentiful, insightful feedback. I look forward to working with her again sometime in the future as well!
$1,000-$1,500
Price
5 weeks
Duration
J 
Seller's Response
Helpful?M megtenuta

United States
Jessica was amazing to work with. Very professional as well as responsive. She got the job done within the timeframe and gave excellent feedback on how to improve my story. I will be hiring her again!
Up to $50
Price
12 days
Duration
J 
Seller's Response
Helpful?R 
river_guthrie

United States
Jess did a phenomenal job editing my first book. The feedback was detailed, thoughtful, incredibly helpful, and improved the manuscript while still respecting my voice and vision for the story. I’m extremely happy with the work and would absolutely recommend her to other writers looking for a skilled and attentive editor.
$1,000-$1,500
Price
5 weeks
Duration
J 
Seller's Response
Helpful?J jdfwhite

United Kingdom
Working with Jess has been a joy. My manuscript was over the amount listed so I requested a custom offer to edit the work. I was unsure what to expect with this being my first novel, and Jess took the time to explain the process, which was a relief. I received a mid-point update which calmed the nerves...
$1,000-$1,500
Price
5 weeks
Duration
J 
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