I will beta read and critique your novel or short story

5.0
5.0

Canada

I speak English

145 orders completed

Gig Summary

Professional Beta Reader for Fiction Writers

I’m a passionate reader and writer who reads 100+ books a year and provides thoughtful, honest beta reading for fiction authors of all genres. I’ve taken writing courses, written my own novel, and am ...

Level 2

Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.

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About this Gig

Hello, writers!


I'm a passionate reader and fiction writer who reads 100+ books a year and offers thoughtful, honest beta reading for fiction authors of all genres. I've written my own novel, giving me firsthand experience with the writing and revision process.


When I beta read, I approach your manuscript as an active reader, focusing on how the story feels, flows, and holds attention.


While reading, I consider:


  • Pacing and flow
  • Character development and consistency
  • Dialogue authenticity
  • Clarity and readability
  • Emotional impact
  • World/setting immersion


What you'll receive:


  • In-document first impression comments
  • Honest, constructive reader reactions
  • A reader report with big-picture feedback on plot, pacing, characters, tone, and overall readability


How I work:


  • Google Docs or Word
  • Comments while reading + reader report after
  • No AI used at any point


Please note:


  • Fiction only (no nonfiction or children's books)
  • No line or copy editing
  • Message me for manuscripts over 100k words


If you have any questions before ordering, feel free to reach out!

Genre:

Horror/ thriller

Literary fiction

Mystery

Romance

Fantasy

Language:

English

Delivery style preference

Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.

Reviews

121 reviews for this Gig
5.0

(117)
(4)
(0)
(0)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    4.9
  • Value of delivery
    5
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    anne_shirley_19

    CA

    Canada

    5

    Jessii provided precise, thorough feedback that was actionable and led to meaningful improvements in my manuscript. She caught genuine gaps in the evidence and clue chain that I simply couldn't see as the author. After I revised, she gave a detailed comparison explaining what had improved and why the...

    $200-$400

    Price

    6 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • S
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    shmerp

    US

    United States

    5

    They did a great job breaking down each of the issues with the manuscript in regards to pacing, characters, and plot. The inline comments are especially helpful to see where big reveals/hook land successfully vs. where there could be confusion. This type of early review and beta reading is such an invaluable tool for manuscript development!

    $200-$400

    Price

    3 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • J
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    julianconner

    US

    United States

    4.7

    Despite of my lack of communication on my end. She was very communicative always trying provide the best service. I will purchase again and recommend

    $100-$200

    Price

    6 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • C
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    cl_doc

    US

    United States

    5

    An incredible beta read experience. She gave specific, thoughtful, and genuinely useful feedback that showed she deeply engaged with the story. As a first-time author sharing this manuscript outside my close circle, her insight and care meant so much. Highly recommend!

    $50

    Price

    1 day

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • E

    ethanknightley

    GB

    United Kingdom

    Ongoing collaboration
    4.3

    Jessii was, once again, a pleasure to work with; she managed to complete the job (a big job, wordcount of over 250k) well in advance of her own deadline, and what was sent to me was thorough and done to a high quality. Her reader report was top quality: A++. She fully understood the book, had engaged...

    $600-$800

    Price

    2 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
Reviews

121 reviews for this Gig
5.0

(117)
(4)
(0)
(0)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    4.9
  • Value of delivery
    5
Sort By
Most relevant
  • A

    anne_shirley_19

    CA

    Canada

    5

    Jessii provided precise, thorough feedback that was actionable and led to meaningful improvements in my manuscript. She caught genuine gaps in the evidence and clue chain that I simply couldn't see as the author. After I revised, she gave a detailed comparison explaining what had improved and why the...

    $200-$400

    Price

    6 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • S
    image-docs

    shmerp

    US

    United States

    5

    They did a great job breaking down each of the issues with the manuscript in regards to pacing, characters, and plot. The inline comments are especially helpful to see where big reveals/hook land successfully vs. where there could be confusion. This type of early review and beta reading is such an invaluable tool for manuscript development!

    $200-$400

    Price

    3 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • J
    image-docs

    julianconner

    US

    United States

    4.7

    Despite of my lack of communication on my end. She was very communicative always trying provide the best service. I will purchase again and recommend

    $100-$200

    Price

    6 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • C
    image-docs

    cl_doc

    US

    United States

    5

    An incredible beta read experience. She gave specific, thoughtful, and genuinely useful feedback that showed she deeply engaged with the story. As a first-time author sharing this manuscript outside my close circle, her insight and care meant so much. Highly recommend!

    $50

    Price

    1 day

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • E

    ethanknightley

    GB

    United Kingdom

    Ongoing collaboration
    4.3

    Jessii was, once again, a pleasure to work with; she managed to complete the job (a big job, wordcount of over 250k) well in advance of her own deadline, and what was sent to me was thorough and done to a high quality. Her reader report was top quality: A++. She fully understood the book, had engaged...

    $600-$800

    Price

    2 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No