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I will do dark fantasy book editing, developmental editor, dark romance book, thriller
Amazon kdp book editor expert
Hi, I'm Jessica Linder. I help authors edit, proofread, format, and prepare their books for Amazon KDP. I know how much time and effort goes into writing a manuscript, so I treat every project with ca...
About this Gig
Your story already carries the darkness, tension, and forbidden desire readers crave but it may still be missing the structure that turns pages into obsession.
Many dark fantasy, dark romance, and thriller manuscripts struggle with pacing, weak character motivation, or scenes that fail to fully land the emotional impact. Readers feel it and stop turning pages.
That's where I step in.
As a developmental editor specializing in dark fantasy, dark romance, and thrillers, I shape your manuscript into a gripping, emotionally charged experience strengthening plot structure, deepening character arcs, refining tension, and amplifying the atmosphere that keeps readers hooked until the final line.
Your vision stays yours only sharper, darker, and more unforgettable.
Lets transform your manuscript into a story readers can't escape. Message me to begin.
Language:
English
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French
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German
Genre:
Romance
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Fantasy
Audience :
Teen / young adult
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Adult
Complexity level:
Intermediate
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Advanced
Voice:
Narrative
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
What type of books do you edit?
I specialize in dark fantasy, dark romance, and thriller manuscripts, focusing on developmental editing to strengthen story structure and emotional impact.
What is included in developmental editing?
I review your plot, pacing, character development, world-building, and overall story flow, then provide clear, actionable suggestions to improve your manuscript.
Will you change my writing style or voice?
No. I enhance your story while preserving your unique voice, tone, and creative vision.
How do you deliver feedback?
You will receive detailed editorial notes and in-manuscript comments highlighting strengths, weaknesses, and improvement suggestions.
Do you work with unfinished drafts?
Yes. Whether your manuscript is complete or still developing, I can help refine and shape it into a stronger, publish-ready story.
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Ongoing collaborationThe feedback I received on Chapters 1, 2 and 3 has been absolutely fantastic and incredibly productive. Thanks to your suggestions, the story now moves forward with much better pace, while building tension and anticipation without becoming distracted by unnecessary detail or trivia. Thank you for your...
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Helpful?D dsayers1985
United Kingdom
Ongoing collaborationI am absolutely loving working with you. Each chapter is developing into something I am genuinely proud of, and the improvements to the pacing have made the biggest impact. Your feedback is always thoughtful and thorough, and I am truly grateful for the care and attention you are giving my manuscript.
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D dsayers1985
United Kingdom
Ongoing collaborationThe feedback I received on Chapters 1, 2 and 3 has been absolutely fantastic and incredibly productive. Thanks to your suggestions, the story now moves forward with much better pace, while building tension and anticipation without becoming distracted by unnecessary detail or trivia. Thank you for your...
$50
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?D dsayers1985
United Kingdom
Ongoing collaborationI am absolutely loving working with you. Each chapter is developing into something I am genuinely proud of, and the improvements to the pacing have made the biggest impact. Your feedback is always thoughtful and thorough, and I am truly grateful for the care and attention you are giving my manuscript.
$50
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1 day
Duration
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