I will provide developmental editing and manuscript critique for your novel

United States

I speak English, German, French

Turning Readers into Buyers Through High Converting Cinematic Book Trailers

Hi, I am Johnson Fedrick Books. I am a professional book trailer video expert and visual storyteller dedicated to helping authors, publishers, and indie writers skyrocket their book sales. With deep e...
About this Gig

Is your story feeling flat? Are you struggling with plot holes, pacing issues, or characters that lack depth?


Before you invest in copy editing, you need a solid foundation. As an experienced developmental editor and story editor, I look at the big picture of your novel. I provide constructive, honest, and actionable feedback to elevate your fiction editing process and ensure your book keeps readers hooked from page one.


My Developmental Edit tackles:


  • Plot & Structure: Identifying plot holes, weak subplots, and structural inconsistencies.
  • Character Development: Ensuring your protagonists arc is compelling and side characters are multidimensional.
  • Pacing & Flow: Pointing out scenes that drag or moments that feel rushed.
  • World-Building: Perfect for Science Fiction and Fantasy authors looking for immersive settings.
  • Market Viability: Ensuring your book fits the expectations of the self publishing market.


Lets transform your rough draft into an unforgettable, page-turning story!

Language:

English

French

German

Content Type:

Documents

Book

Resume

Genre:

Action

Adventure

Comic book

Humor/ entertainment

Romance

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