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I will read and criticize your novel or story
Clarity, precision, and professionalism in every word
My name is Jhonatan, a professional translator with over 7 years of experience translating documents from English to Spanish and vice versa. I focus on delivering accurate, clear, and natural translat...
Level 1
Has met certain performance criteria and shows strong potential in the marketplace.
About this Gig
Hello writers!
Im a passionate reader and dedicated beta reader . I offer thoughtful, honest, and reader-focused feedback to help you strengthen your story and captivate your audience.
I approach every manuscript as an active reader, focusing on how your story flows, feels, and keeps attention from beginning to end. My goal is to highlight whats working and give clear, constructive suggestions to improve what can be even better.
What I focus on:
Rhythm and narrative flow
Character development and consistency
Dialogue authenticity
Clarity and readability
Emotional impact (Did it make me laugh, cry, or feel engaged?)
Immersion in the world and setting
What youll get:
In-document comments with real-time reactions
Honest, constructive reader feedback
A clear and detailed report on plot, pacing, characters, and overall readability
A complete beta reading document
Availability for follow-up questions
How I work:
Google Docs or Word
Comments during reading + final report
100% human feedback (no AI used)
If youre looking for a reliable, detail-oriented beta reader who truly cares about your story, Id love to work with you.
Feel free to message me before ordering!
Language:
Spanish
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
Do you use AI in your reviews?
No. I do not use AI at any time in my beta reading process. I personally read each manuscript and write all comments on the document and reader reports myself.
Can I send only one chapter of my story?
Sure! We can work chapter by chapter.
What file formats are accepted?
Documents in Google Docs or Word are preferred so you can leave comments on the document.
Which genres you love to beta read?
I love all genres, however, my favorite are: - Fantasy - Science fiction - Dystopian - Historical fiction - Romance - Adventure - Young adult
Do you read a book that is not finish?
Yes, I think feedback is usefull no mather if the book is not finish.
How would you give feedback on my work?
For every story/novel I work on, I use in-line comments to both express all my impressions and thoughts so you can see the reader's first reaction, and to suggest any corrections and improvements. At the end of the text, you get an extensive report with overall feedback and further comments.
Do you accept adult or sexual content?
Yes, I do. It's fine if your work has it. It's fine if your work doesn't. Adult content can include anything to drug use, violence, sex, and anything similar.
