I will developmental book editor, proofread fiction story, memoir children story book
About this Gig
Every great book deserves professional editing before it reaches readers. Whether you've written a fiction story, memoir, children's story book, or nonfiction manuscript, I'm here to help you strengthen your work and prepare it for publication.
As your developmental book editor, I provide detailed, constructive feedback that improves your manuscript while preserving your unique voice. I focus on the elements that make a story memorable, engaging, and enjoyable for readers.
My services include:
- Developmental editing
- Story structure and plot analysis
- Character development
- Pacing and scene improvement
- Dialogue enhancement
- Consistency and continuity checks
- Line editing
- Grammar, spelling, and punctuation correction
- Proofreading
- Editorial comments and suggestions
- Manuscript evaluation
I work with:
- Fiction novels
- Short stories
- Memoirs
- Children's story books
- Picture books
- Christian books
- Self-help books
- Nonfiction manuscripts
Why choose me?
- Detailed and honest editorial feedback
- Professional grammar and proofreading
- Respect for your writing style and author voice
- On-time delivery and clear communication
- 100% confidentiality for your manuscript
Language:
English
Audience :
General readers
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Children
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Adult
POV:
First person
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Second person
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Third person limited
Complexity level:
Simple / easy read
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Intermediate
Voice:
Narrative
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What’s included in developmental editing?
Developmental editing focuses on the big-picture elements of your manuscript, such as structure, plot, pacing, character development, and themes. I provide a detailed critique and actionable suggestions to improve the flow and overall impact of your book.
What is beta reading, and how does it help?
Beta reading is an objective review of your book from a reader’s perspective. I’ll provide feedback on what works well, what could be improved, and how readers might perceive your book. It’s an essential step before final edits and publishing.
What formatting services do you provide?
I format eBooks and print books for platforms like Amazon Kindle, Smashwords, and IngramSpark. This includes proper layout, chapter headings, clickable table of contents (for eBooks), and clean alignment to ensure your book looks professional.
Do you work on all genres?
I specialize in nonfiction, fiction novels, and memoirs, but I’m open to working on other genres as well. Feel free to message me with your manuscript details to confirm.
How long does the process take?
Delivery time depends on the length and complexity of your manuscript. Developmental editing may take 1–14 days, while formatting can typically be completed within a few days. I’ll provide an estimated timeline once we discuss your project.
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Ongoing collaborationJordan did an exceptional job with my manuscript. Her developmental editing, line editing, and copy editing were all thorough, insightful, and highly professional. She didn’t just correct errors, she helped strengthen the structure, clarity, and overall flow of my story. Communication was smooth, and...
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United States
Ongoing collaborationJordan is an outstanding editor. Her expertise in developmental editing, line editing, and copy editing significantly enhanced my manuscript. She provided thoughtful feedback that improved both the narrative structure and language precision. Her professionalism and commitment to quality are truly commendable. I would confidently recommend her services.
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2 days
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Helpful?D dech_will22

United States
Outstanding editing service! This seller did an excellent job with developmental editing, line editing, and copy editing on my manuscript. Her feedback was insightful, detailed, and greatly improved the clarity, structure, and flow of my work while preserving my original voice. Communication was professional...
$50
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5 days
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United States
Ongoing collaborationJordan did an exceptional job with my manuscript. Her developmental editing, line editing, and copy editing were all thorough, insightful, and highly professional. She didn’t just correct errors, she helped strengthen the structure, clarity, and overall flow of my story. Communication was smooth, and...
$50
Price
2 days
Duration
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Seller's Response
Helpful?X xus_smato

United States
Ongoing collaborationJordan is an outstanding editor. Her expertise in developmental editing, line editing, and copy editing significantly enhanced my manuscript. She provided thoughtful feedback that improved both the narrative structure and language precision. Her professionalism and commitment to quality are truly commendable. I would confidently recommend her services.
$50
Price
2 days
Duration
J 
Seller's Response
Helpful?D dech_will22

United States
Outstanding editing service! This seller did an excellent job with developmental editing, line editing, and copy editing on my manuscript. Her feedback was insightful, detailed, and greatly improved the clarity, structure, and flow of my work while preserving my original voice. Communication was professional...
$50
Price
5 days
Duration
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