I will provide detailed and thoughtful screenplay feedback

United States

I speak English

Screenwriter

I am a screenwriter and screenplay reader with experience in drama, thriller, and comedy. I have completed four original screenplays, including feature-length and short-film work, and I regularly prov...

About this Gig

I'll give your script a close read and ACTUALLY analyze it beyond surface-level tweaks. This includes the story/plot, the characters/development, dialogue, structure, pacing, and actionable suggestions.

Also, I will take the time to experience your screenplay without glossing over it---no generic advice.

I've written multiple scripts, and I know how valuable outside feedback is, as well as how frustrating vague or surface-level feedback is.

My goal is to leave you with a clear understanding of how your screenplay came across to a reader and another writer, and what you may want to consider as you move into your next draft.

I'll provide AT LEAST 3 pages of criticism and up to 5. You can specify how you want it (e.g., strengths/weaknesses, live notes + overall).