I will professionally beta read your mafia romance and give honest feedback

5.0
5.0

Nigeria

I speak English, German

2 orders completed

BETA READER

Hi, I’m Tunmise, a passionate beta reader specializing in romance and fantasy novels. I provide detailed feedback on plot, pacing, character development, and overall storytelling to help you polish yo...
About this Gig

Professional Book Editing & Proofreading for Authors


Hello, I provide professional book editing and proofreading to help authors improve clarity, grammar, and overall readability while keeping your unique voice intact.


Whether you're working on a novel, short story, or nonfiction manuscript, I will carefully review your writing and provide helpful edits and suggestions.


What I can help you with:

  • Grammar, spelling, and punctuation corrections
  • Sentence clarity and readability improvements
  • Flow and consistency editing
  • Constructive in-line comments and suggestions
  • Beta reader feedback on plot, pacing, and characters


I work directly in Microsoft Word using Track Changes, so you can easily see all edits and suggestions.


What you will receive:

  • One edited document with tracked changes
  • One clean, ready-to-use copy
  • Helpful feedback to strengthen your writing


My goal is to help you present a polished manuscript that readers will enjoy.

I'm happy to edit a short sample of 200-300 words so you can see my editing style before ordering.


Feel free to send me a message before ordering if you have questions about your project.

Language:

English

French

German

Portuguese

Spanish

Genre:

Action

Adventure

Business management

Children’s books

Audience :

General readers

Children

Teen / young adult

Adult

POV:

First person

Second person

Third person limited

Complexity level:

Simple / easy read

Intermediate

Advanced

Voice:

Active

Delivery style preference

Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.

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    Repeat Client

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    5

    Tunmise has really grasped where I want to go with this story and is fully invested on seeing where I go with it. he's on the same page as me with the characters and the setting, etc. thank you so much!

    $200-$400

    Price

    5 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
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    kimbhayes

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    As always great editing. He has a good grasp on where the story is going and understands what i'm looking for. I'm looking forward to working with him more in the future. thank you so much for everything!

    $100-$200

    Price

    3 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
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Reviews

2 reviews for this Gig
5.0

(2)
(0)
(0)
(0)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    5
  • Value of delivery
    5
Sort By
Most relevant
  • K
    image-docs

    kimbhayes

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Tunmise has really grasped where I want to go with this story and is fully invested on seeing where I go with it. he's on the same page as me with the characters and the setting, etc. thank you so much!

    $200-$400

    Price

    5 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • K
    image-docs

    kimbhayes

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    As always great editing. He has a good grasp on where the story is going and understands what i'm looking for. I'm looking forward to working with him more in the future. thank you so much for everything!

    $100-$200

    Price

    3 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No