I will give you constructive feedback and coverage for your script

Are you ready to take your script to the next level? I provide professional, in-depth feedback and notes with a strong focus on character development, helping you craft compelling, believable characters that drive your story.

As the head of one of the most popular international script competitions, I bring a unique perspective on what makes a story resonate with readers, judges, and audiences alike.

With this gig, you'll receive:

• Comprehensive Story Coverage Plot, structure, pacing, and character arcs analysed in detail.

• Character-Focused Notes Deep insights into your characters motivations, relationships, and growth throughout your story.

• Actionable Suggestions Clear, practical recommendations to strengthen scenes, dialogue, and narrative flow.

• Professional Perspective Feedback written with an eye toward industry standards and storytelling craft.

• Optional Consultation Discuss your script and notes via messaging or Zoom for clarity.

Whether you're refining a logline, synopsis, treatment, or full script, my goal is to provide feedback that is honest, constructive, and character-driven, helping your story reach its fullest potential.