I will developmental edit adventure magical supernatural fantasy or romantasy novel

United States

I speak English

BOOK EDITOR AND FORMATTER

I’m Joy Davids, a Christian who strongly believes in God and was raised in a Christian family in the United States. I love reading and helping authors refine their Christian and non-fiction books. I f...
About this Gig

Your book plot may feel slow, your characters aren't developing as naturally as you intended, the romance lacks tension, or the fantasy world is creating confusion instead of pulling readers deeper into the story. You may know something isn't working, but can't pinpoint exactly what.


I will developmental edit your fantasy romance or romantasy novel with a focus on the story beneath the sentences.


I can help with:

  • Plot & story structure
  • Character arcs & motivations
  • Romance development & chemistry
  • Pacing & chapter flow
  • Conflict, tension & stakes
  • Worldbuilding & consistency
  • Plot holes & weak transitions
  • Repetition & unnecessary scenes
  • Emotional progression
  • Reader engagement


You'll receive clear, practical feedback that explains what isn't working, why it matters, and how you can strengthen it while preserving your voice and creative vision.

I specialize in fantasy romance, romantasy, fae romance, paranormal romance, dark fantasy, and YA fantasy.


Send me your manuscript, synopsis, and concerns, and let me strengthen your story from the inside out.

Language:

English

Genre:

Adventure

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Children’s books

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Horror/ thriller

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Mystery

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Romance

Audience :

General readers

POV:

Multiple POVs

Complexity level:

Advanced

Voice:

Passive

Delivery style preference

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