I will give you unvarnished beta reader or alpha reader feedback

5.0
5.0

United States

I speak English

2 orders completed

Unvarnished, Unfiltered, Sincere, and Supportive Feedback

I'm a reader and a writer. I'm a biker, an IT guy, the World's Okayest Dad, and I'm usually about as mature as a twelve-year-old boy that just hit puberty. I don't have a degree, but I do have a motor...
About this Gig

Bottom Line Up Front: You can't get where you want to go if you don't know where you are. I'll give you my thoughts as a reader, and that will help you figure out where to go next. I won't coddle you, but I will support you and your work as best I can.


I'm a reader, and I'm a writer. I focus on fantasy, sci-fi, and horror, but I'm open to anything. Send me your work, and I'll tell you:

 - which parts I did and didn't like

 - if I connected with your characters

 - if I understood what I think you're trying to say

 - if I want to read more of your story

 - if I'd read it again

 - and, most importantly, why I said what I said.

If you give me any other questions you have, I'll answer those too.

I can also send you a Google Docs link so you can see my notes before I finish and send my final report.


I'll tell you how your work impacts me as a reader, not how to change it. It's your story, not mine. However, I can offer suggestions as long as you understand that I'm not an editor. Of course, I'll let you know if I find something seriously wrong.


Drafts at any stage are fine, complete or incomplete, as are synopses and outlines.

Genre:

Adventure

Children’s books

Horror/ thriller

Language:

English

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    bob_teter

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    5

    I'm very happy with John's Beta Review.

    $50

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    6 days

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    keithskaggs

    US

    United States

    5

    I received the delivery days ahead of delivery. I was pleasantly surprised. I asked for an evaluation of the story of 20 zines and the covers of the 20 zines. I asked for one revision to send the file in a different format that I could read. The evaluation was honest when it came to spelling and grammatical...

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2 reviews for this Gig
5.0

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  • Seller communication level
    5
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    5
  • Value of delivery
    5
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    bob_teter

    US

    United States

    5

    I'm very happy with John's Beta Review.

    $50

    Price

    6 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • K
    image-docs

    keithskaggs

    US

    United States

    5

    I received the delivery days ahead of delivery. I was pleasantly surprised. I asked for an evaluation of the story of 20 zines and the covers of the 20 zines. I asked for one revision to send the file in a different format that I could read. The evaluation was honest when it came to spelling and grammatical...

    $50

    Price

    3 days

    Duration

    Worksample image
    Helpful?
    Yes
    No