I will give you unvarnished reader feedback

United States

I speak English

Unvarnished, Unfiltered, Sincere, and Supportive Feedback

I am your reader: the guy you want to thumb through your book and decide to buy it. I'm an IT guy, a biker, the World's Okayest Dad, and about as mature as a twelve-year-old boy who just hit puberty. ...
About this Gig

I'm a reader, and I'm a writer. I focus on fantasy and sci-fi, but I'm open to anything. Send me your work, and I'll answer these questions: 

 - Which parts did or didn't I like?

 - Did I connect with your characters? 

 - Did I understand what you're trying to say? 

 - Do I want to read more of your story? 

 - Would I re-read it? 

 - Finally, and most importantly, why did I say what I said?


If you want some other sort of non-editorial feedback, let me know.

If you want me to focus on anything specific, just ask.


My job is to tell you how your work impacts me, not how to change it. It's your story, not mine. However, I can offer suggestions, as long as you understand the following:

 - You must ask specifically for me to offer suggestions.

 - I'm not an editor. (If I find something seriously wrong, though, I'll let you know.)


Drafts at any stage are fine, complete or incomplete, as are synopses and outlines.


The bottom line is this: you can't get where you want to go if you don't know where you are. I'll give you my thoughts in a way that won't coddle you, but I will support you. At the end of the day, I hope to help you get closer to where you want to be.

Genre:

Adventure

Children’s books

Horror/ thriller

Language:

English

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