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I will write a developmental edit report for your novel
Editor, Beta Reader Offering Constructive Fiction Feedback for Authors
I’m Johan Robertsson—a published author and editor with a background in journalism, marketing, and creative writing.
For almost two decades, I’ve worked with stories in every form, from ad copy to fu...
Level 2
Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.
What people loved about this freelancer
ryan_a_bender
United States
I've had the pleasurable experience of working with Johan on my first novel, then again for the rewrite on that novel, then again for the sequel to that novel....
outermind69
Canada
Far exceeded my expectations. Johan is like a forensic investigator. I actually laughed several times reading his feedback because of how spot on it was, and...
nachole
United States
I had Johan beta-read my manuscript and give me a developmental edit for my upcoming book, and I'm blown away by his attention to detail, commentary, and suggestions...
About this Gig
Are you having trouble unlocking the true potential of your manuscript?
Once we've written our first and second draft, many of us can get a bit stuck. The plot seems to drag, the characters feel a bit off at times, and why are some sections still boring even after you've turned up the action/tension/ninja dinosaurs to eleven?
What you need is a Developmental Edit
As an editor for your manuscript, I can give you insight into how a reader experiences your story and give constructive feedback on how to improve it from someone who understands the craft.
Through a detailed report (see enclosed example) and in-line comments, I will address every element of your story, and try to bring as many new inspiring perspectives to them as possible. This way, you will see your manuscript in a different light, and hopefully have a bunch of new ideas and solutions for how to make it shine.
Why should you choose me?
As a writer myself, I know what you might want to hear and what you might need to hear. I will give you a bit of both, but nothing but the truth, so that you can feel confident in your manuscript and your skill, making sure your next draft reaches a new level.
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Gig workflow
These are the steps we’ll follow to complete your project.
- Basic Package.
- Preparations
I'll make the necessary preparations to start your project.
- Beta Read & Report
I'll beta read your manuscript.
- Edits
I'll edit your manuscript.
- Proofreading
I'll do a final proofread to have your manuscript ready for publishing.
- Delivery
I'll send you the final delivery for review and feedback.
These are the steps we’ll follow to complete your project.
FAQ
Is my manuscript ready for developmental feedback?
I believe you are ready for developmental feedback when you've done everything you can to make your manuscript readable and engaging, but still feel a bit stuck. You're certain there's potential in the words, but the story just wont come out to play. That's when you need some developmental feedback.
What does the Reader Report include?
The report will contain a breakdown of all major categories of your story and thoughts and feedback on them. These include: overall impressions and review; characters and their development; plot and structure; settings and descriptions; themes and motifs; prose and grammar; and additional thoughts.
What does the Inline Comments include?
Depending on which gig you order, inline comments will include my impressions as a reader ("this evoked this initial emotion/reaction") and in-depth feedback and ideas for improvement ("this line of dialogue seems out of character", or "what if she didn't do that, but this instead?").
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ryan_a_bender
Repeat Client
United States
I've had the pleasurable experience of working with Johan on my first novel, then again for the rewrite on that novel, then again for the sequel to that novel. There's a lot I could say, but the word "Wow." really sums it up best. He notices things that nobody else seems to notice (including me), and...
$200-$400
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?N 
nachole
United States
I had Johan beta-read my manuscript and give me a developmental edit for my upcoming book, and I'm blown away by his attention to detail, commentary, and suggestions for improvement. My book is pretty in-depth and can be a difficult read because of the subject matter, but Johan helped me polish everything...
$100-$200
Price
3 weeks
Duration
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Helpful?O outermind69
Canada
Far exceeded my expectations. Johan is like a forensic investigator. I actually laughed several times reading his feedback because of how spot on it was, and has given me a fire to get back to my story that had me lost. I now have a clear direction and laser focused objective for my next draft and never...
$100-$200
Price
3 weeks
Duration
J Seller's Response
Helpful?B blackspartacus
United States
Johan went above and beyond and I will use and recommend him going forward.
$200-$400
Price
4 weeks
Duration
Helpful?R ryan_a_bender
Repeat Client
United States
My second time working with Johan (four years apart!) and I am even more shocked than last time at how good this was. This surpassed all of my expectations, which were already high. The depth and quantity of his feedback are simply astounding, and the care and detail with which he expresses himself make...
$100-$200
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?
Reviews
5 reviews for this Gig
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R ryan_a_bender
Repeat Client
United States
I've had the pleasurable experience of working with Johan on my first novel, then again for the rewrite on that novel, then again for the sequel to that novel. There's a lot I could say, but the word "Wow." really sums it up best. He notices things that nobody else seems to notice (including me), and...
$200-$400
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?N nachole
United States
I had Johan beta-read my manuscript and give me a developmental edit for my upcoming book, and I'm blown away by his attention to detail, commentary, and suggestions for improvement. My book is pretty in-depth and can be a difficult read because of the subject matter, but Johan helped me polish everything...
$100-$200
Price
3 weeks
Duration
J Seller's Response
Helpful?O outermind69
Canada
Far exceeded my expectations. Johan is like a forensic investigator. I actually laughed several times reading his feedback because of how spot on it was, and has given me a fire to get back to my story that had me lost. I now have a clear direction and laser focused objective for my next draft and never...
$100-$200
Price
3 weeks
Duration
J Seller's Response
Helpful?B blackspartacus
United States
Johan went above and beyond and I will use and recommend him going forward.
$200-$400
Price
4 weeks
Duration
Helpful?R ryan_a_bender
Repeat Client
United States
My second time working with Johan (four years apart!) and I am even more shocked than last time at how good this was. This surpassed all of my expectations, which were already high. The depth and quantity of his feedback are simply astounding, and the care and detail with which he expresses himself make...
$100-$200
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?
