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I will give inline comments on your manuscript up to 80k words
Editor, Beta Reader Offering Constructive Fiction Feedback for Authors
I’m Johan Robertsson—a published author and editor with a background in journalism, marketing, and creative writing.
For almost two decades, I’ve worked with stories in every form, from ad copy to fu...
Level 2
Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.
What people loved about this freelancer
baileytuffs
United States
This is the one you want. Full stop. Delivered on time and potentially the best value on the app. Would use again without hesitation.
shmerp
United States
I loved reading through Johan's comments. It was so intriguing to see through the eyes of the reader as they hit various points in the book. His notes on things...
ciwstudy
United States
I really appreciated how the seller provided feedback throughout the manuscript. It really helps to know specific details about a sentence or paragraph that hits wrong. I will use this seller again.
jamie_viljam
Sweden
Väldigt nöjd med responsen! Johan var tydlig, engagerad och konstruktiv i sin feedback genom hela läsningen. Han pekade inte bara ut sådant som kunde förbättras,...
About this Gig
Want detailed, realtime feedback on your manuscript?
Sometimes what you need isn't a long report, but clear, direct insight exactly where it matters.
As you write and revise, it's easy to miss how your story actually reads line by line. Are certain passages unclear? Does dialogue feel natural? Are there moments where pacing slows or tension drops?
Thats where inline feedback makes all the difference.
I will read your manuscript and provide comments directly in your document, giving you real-time reader reactions and constructive suggestions.
My feedback includes:
- Reader impressions and emotional responses
- Clarity and flow suggestions
- Dialogue and character consistency notes
- Pacing and engagement observations
- Specific ideas for improvement where needed
You'll see exactly how your story is experienced moment by moment along with practical insights you can apply immediately.
Why work with me?
I'm a published author, focusing on constructive, actionable feedback. I don't just point things out, but will help you understand why something works or doesn't, so you can improve with confidence.
Contact me today, and we'll get your novel ready to truly connect with readers!
Language:
English
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Swedish
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Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
Do you use AI in your work?
No. Why? AI doesn't really read, it doesn't feel—it doesn't experience. That's what we do, as readers and writers, and that is what literature as a medium is about. Therefore, I keep AI out of your manuscript, and your MS out of AI. It doesn't get anywhere near my analysis, reports or comments.
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B baileytuffs
United States
This is the one you want. Full stop. Delivered on time and potentially the best value on the app. Would use again without hesitation.
$50-$100
Price
2 weeks
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shmerp
United States
I loved reading through Johan's comments. It was so intriguing to see through the eyes of the reader as they hit various points in the book. His notes on things that could be approved were spot on and great ideas. I highly recommend!
$50-$100
Price
2 weeks
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ciwstudy
United States
I really appreciated how the seller provided feedback throughout the manuscript. It really helps to know specific details about a sentence or paragraph that hits wrong. I will use this seller again.
Up to $50
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2 weeks
Duration
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jamie_viljam
Sweden
Väldigt nöjd med responsen! Johan var tydlig, engagerad och konstruktiv i sin feedback genom hela läsningen. Han pekade inte bara ut sådant som kunde förbättras, utan gav också konkreta och värdefulla tips som hjälpte mig att se manuset ur nya perspektiv och utveckla det vidare. För övrigt snabb leverans,...
$50-$100
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3 weeks
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B baileytuffs
United States
This is the one you want. Full stop. Delivered on time and potentially the best value on the app. Would use again without hesitation.
$50-$100
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?S shmerp
United States
I loved reading through Johan's comments. It was so intriguing to see through the eyes of the reader as they hit various points in the book. His notes on things that could be approved were spot on and great ideas. I highly recommend!
$50-$100
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?C ciwstudy
United States
I really appreciated how the seller provided feedback throughout the manuscript. It really helps to know specific details about a sentence or paragraph that hits wrong. I will use this seller again.
Up to $50
Price
2 weeks
Duration
J Seller's Response
Helpful?J jamie_viljam
Sweden
Väldigt nöjd med responsen! Johan var tydlig, engagerad och konstruktiv i sin feedback genom hela läsningen. Han pekade inte bara ut sådant som kunde förbättras, utan gav också konkreta och värdefulla tips som hjälpte mig att se manuset ur nya perspektiv och utveckla det vidare. För övrigt snabb leverans,...
$50-$100
Price
3 weeks
Duration
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