I will beta read your character development and pacing

I'm a Third Culture Kid raised in Canada and currently living in Egypt. Being native-fluent in English and French allows me to catch subtle linguistic and cultural nuances that others might miss, ensuring your story translates well to an international audience. Because I work daily with visual hierarchy and copywriting, I approach your manuscript with a focus on clarity. I am highly sensitive to info-vomit and sluggish pacing. If a scene is hard to visualize or the word choice breaks the immersion, I will help you tighten it up.

My feedback focuses heavily on character psychology. Having navigated mental health across two very different cultures, I look for authentic internal struggles. I will let you know if a character's actions feel off or if their emotional journey needs more grounding.

Depending on the package, you will receive a summary of my thoughts along with inline comments throughout the text.

Please contact me before booking so we can discuss your goals and find the best fit for your project.