I will beta read your romantasy novel and give actionable feedback
Experienced Beta Reader and Developmental Editor
Level 1
Has met certain performance criteria and shows strong potential in the marketplace.
What people loved about this freelancer
defconrocks

United States
The feed back was hearfelt and actionable. My novel will improve as a result. Honestly the best feedback out of many. Well done and thanks again. Can say enough...
jl_storm777

United States
Wow, wow, wow! This is my second time working with Kira, and she continues to blow me away with the quality of her feedback. Her insights from my first round...
celinesiderov

Austria
Kira’s notes are exceptional! I can see clearly that she spent a lot of time with the story and actively thinking about improving every aspect about it! I would definitely book her again!!
amethystandcoin

United States
Great feedback on problem areas. Very easy to work with and delivered ahead of schedule. Was happy yo answer my additional questions and gave me all the info...
heather_bright

United States
I had a positive and productive experience with Kira. It was clear she had took the time to engage with my manuscript and provided detailed and carefully thought...
About this Gig
Get the gentle, honest, and unbiased feedback that your manuscript needs.
If you're writing a fantasy, romance, or romantasy book, I can provide a detailed beta read with in-text comments and an actionable report to help you ready your manuscript for publishing. I know that sharing your work with someone can be daunting, but all critiques are strictly constructive, and every positive will be highlighted!
The beta read includes:
In-line comments throughout your manuscript, such as:
- My honest reactions
- Emotional impact
- What works and what doesn't
A structured reader report covering:
- First impressions
- Plot & pacing
- Character development
- Dialogue & emotional impact
- Worldbuilding with a focus on magic systems
- Clear, actionable suggestions for improvement
This is perfect for writers preparing to self-publish, those looking to submit their novel to agents, and anyone looking for genuine feedback on their work.
I am experienced in the romance, fantasy, and romantasy genre, known for providing detailed, constructive feedback, and trusted by over 100 authors on Fiverr.
Ready to transform your manuscript?
Contact me first to book your beta read
I do not use AI
Language:
English
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Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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D defconrocks

United States
The feed back was hearfelt and actionable. My novel will improve as a result. Honestly the best feedback out of many. Well done and thanks again. Can say enough positive things. I am certain we will work together again. Job well done.
$100-$200
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?J jl_storm777
Repeat Client

United States
Wow, wow, wow! This is my second time working with Kira, and she continues to blow me away with the quality of her feedback. Her insights from my first round with her helped shape my draft into what it is today, and I am infinitely thankful for her input. She picked up on things and made suggestions...
$100-$200
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?C celinesiderov

Austria
Kira’s notes are exceptional! I can see clearly that she spent a lot of time with the story and actively thinking about improving every aspect about it! I would definitely book her again!!
$100-$200
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?A amethystandcoin
Repeat Client

United States
Great feedback on problem areas. Very easy to work with and delivered ahead of schedule. Was happy yo answer my additional questions and gave me all the info I need to make the last edits I needed. Would love to work with her agan!
$100-$200
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?H heather_bright
Repeat Client

United States
I had a positive and productive experience with Kira. It was clear she had took the time to engage with my manuscript and provided detailed and carefully thought of feedback. I appreciated that the effort put into the responses felt genuine and constructive without being too harsh.
Up to $50
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?
14 reviews for this Gig
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Rating Breakdown
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- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
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D defconrocks

United States
The feed back was hearfelt and actionable. My novel will improve as a result. Honestly the best feedback out of many. Well done and thanks again. Can say enough positive things. I am certain we will work together again. Job well done.
$100-$200
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?J jl_storm777
Repeat Client

United States
Wow, wow, wow! This is my second time working with Kira, and she continues to blow me away with the quality of her feedback. Her insights from my first round with her helped shape my draft into what it is today, and I am infinitely thankful for her input. She picked up on things and made suggestions...
$100-$200
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?C celinesiderov

Austria
Kira’s notes are exceptional! I can see clearly that she spent a lot of time with the story and actively thinking about improving every aspect about it! I would definitely book her again!!
$100-$200
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?A amethystandcoin
Repeat Client

United States
Great feedback on problem areas. Very easy to work with and delivered ahead of schedule. Was happy yo answer my additional questions and gave me all the info I need to make the last edits I needed. Would love to work with her agan!
$100-$200
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?H heather_bright
Repeat Client

United States
I had a positive and productive experience with Kira. It was clear she had took the time to engage with my manuscript and provided detailed and carefully thought of feedback. I appreciated that the effort put into the responses felt genuine and constructive without being too harsh.
Up to $50
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?

