I will beta read, critique, romance beta reader, alpha beta reader, beta reader fantasy
Double beta readers
Level 1
Has met certain performance criteria and shows strong potential in the marketplace.
What people loved about this freelancer
jerryjordan551

United States
Writing a Book with a lot of potential is not enough, we need a willing readers. I will offer you a favor hand it to the ladies. They will reduce your chances...
jerryjordan551

United States
Kath and cade again elevated the remaining part of my Writing from roughly good to exceptional.Both had different opinions and thoughts about some of the same...
teresamarie_23

United States
It took only a few sentences into the review to see that this was done by someone who truly cared about my story and was dedicated enough to show me how to...
teresamarie_23

United States
She is my go-to person. She provides more than a review; she provides a training manual. I am new to writing, so sometimes I my intentions are not clear on...
sam_bennettbook

Australia
Great detailed feedback with actionable insights. Each recommendation was clearly explained, practical to implement, and tied back to real improvements rather...
About this Gig
Are you looking for honest, thoughtful feedback on your manuscript?
We are Maria and Luna, a mother-daughter beta reading team who share a deep love for storytelling and helping writers strengthen their work. Maria holds a PhD in linguistics and brings over 15 years of experience teaching language, narrative clarity, and effective communication. Luna has a Master's degree in English and works with Simon & Schuster, giving her firsthand insight into professional publishing expectations.
We provide thoughtful beta reader reports with focused in-line comments that address plot, character development, pacing, dialogue, structure, and overall reader engagement. Our feedback is detailed, practical, and easy to apply, helping you clearly see what's working and where your story can become stronger.
GENRE WE LOVE
- Romance/Dark Romance
- Mystery/Thriller
- Dystopian/ Beta reader fantasy
- YA/ LGBTQ
- Non-fiction and other related fields
Our approach is honest and detailed. We value your voice as a writer and aim to help you refine your story with clarity and confidence.
If you're ready for two experienced perspectives on your manuscript, we would love to read your work.
Language:
English
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French
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
what If I want to go for just 1 beta reader
Maria, with 15 years of experience in the field, will handle that
How many Beta reader report will I get if I go for he double beta reading service
You will get two different reports with different perspectives and suggestions
What makes you standout
We don't sugarcoat, and we are very straightforward in our feedback
Can You do Inline comment
Yes, we can handle your inline comment
I just need a broad beta reading feedback because I'm about to publish my book. just need a final feedback
We've got you covered
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jerryjordan551
Repeat Client

United States
Writing a Book with a lot of potential is not enough, we need a willing readers. I will offer you a favor hand it to the ladies. They will reduce your chances of Rejections and maximize your chances of getting an agent and make sure there are no plot holes. Also, the feeling of having your first readers...
Up to $50
Price
3 days
Duration
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Helpful?J 
jerryjordan551
Repeat Client

United States
Kath and cade again elevated the remaining part of my Writing from roughly good to exceptional.Both had different opinions and thoughts about some of the same things/pace /structure of the story which helped me to see how different readers would react. They also gave me a Sample Line Edit for my first 3 chapters ( THANK YOU FOR THAT)
Up to $50
Price
3 days
Duration
K 
Seller's Response
Helpful?T teresamarie_23
Repeat Client

United States
It took only a few sentences into the review to see that this was done by someone who truly cared about my story and was dedicated enough to show me how to make it stronger. She's given me inspiration and some work to do. And that's exactly what I was looking for.
Up to $50
Price
10 days
Duration
Helpful?T teresamarie_23
Repeat Client

United States
She is my go-to person. She provides more than a review; she provides a training manual. I am new to writing, so sometimes I my intentions are not clear on the page, but she catches it, every time. She takes the time to understand!
Up to $50
Price
10 days
Duration
Helpful?S sam_bennettbook

Australia
Great detailed feedback with actionable insights. Each recommendation was clearly explained, practical to implement, and tied back to real improvements rather than vague theory. Really appreciated the balance between identifying opportunities for improvement while also explaining what was already working well. Thank you.
$50-$100
Price
11 days
Duration
Helpful?
11 reviews for this Gig
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jerryjordan551
Repeat Client

United States
Writing a Book with a lot of potential is not enough, we need a willing readers. I will offer you a favor hand it to the ladies. They will reduce your chances of Rejections and maximize your chances of getting an agent and make sure there are no plot holes. Also, the feeling of having your first readers...
Up to $50
Price
3 days
Duration
K 
Seller's Response
Helpful?J 
jerryjordan551
Repeat Client

United States
Kath and cade again elevated the remaining part of my Writing from roughly good to exceptional.Both had different opinions and thoughts about some of the same things/pace /structure of the story which helped me to see how different readers would react. They also gave me a Sample Line Edit for my first 3 chapters ( THANK YOU FOR THAT)
Up to $50
Price
3 days
Duration
K 
Seller's Response
Helpful?T teresamarie_23
Repeat Client

United States
It took only a few sentences into the review to see that this was done by someone who truly cared about my story and was dedicated enough to show me how to make it stronger. She's given me inspiration and some work to do. And that's exactly what I was looking for.
Up to $50
Price
10 days
Duration
Helpful?T teresamarie_23
Repeat Client

United States
She is my go-to person. She provides more than a review; she provides a training manual. I am new to writing, so sometimes I my intentions are not clear on the page, but she catches it, every time. She takes the time to understand!
Up to $50
Price
10 days
Duration
Helpful?S sam_bennettbook

Australia
Great detailed feedback with actionable insights. Each recommendation was clearly explained, practical to implement, and tied back to real improvements rather than vague theory. Really appreciated the balance between identifying opportunities for improvement while also explaining what was already working well. Thank you.
$50-$100
Price
11 days
Duration
Helpful?

