I will beta read, critique, romance beta reader, alpha beta reader, beta reader fantasy

5.0
5.0

United States

I speak English, French

17 orders completed

Double beta readers

Hello Great Authors! We are a professional beta-reading and editing team helping authors refine their manuscripts for successful self-publishing. Kathleen has 15+ years as a Linguistic Teacher with a ...

Level 1

Has met certain performance criteria and shows strong potential in the marketplace.

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About this Gig

Are you looking for honest, thoughtful feedback on your manuscript?


We are Maria and Luna, a mother-daughter beta reading team who share a deep love for storytelling and helping writers strengthen their work. Maria holds a PhD in linguistics and brings over 15 years of experience teaching language, narrative clarity, and effective communication. Luna has a Master's degree in English and works with Simon & Schuster, giving her firsthand insight into professional publishing expectations.


We provide thoughtful beta reader reports with focused in-line comments that address plot, character development, pacing, dialogue, structure, and overall reader engagement. Our feedback is detailed, practical, and easy to apply, helping you clearly see what's working and where your story can become stronger.


GENRE WE LOVE

  • Romance/Dark Romance
  • Mystery/Thriller
  • Dystopian/ Beta reader fantasy
  • YA/ LGBTQ
  • Non-fiction and other related fields


Our approach is honest and detailed. We value your voice as a writer and aim to help you refine your story with clarity and confidence.


If you're ready for two experienced perspectives on your manuscript, we would love to read your work.

Genre:

Fanfiction

Horror/ thriller

Mystery

Romance

Science fiction

Language:

English

French

Delivery style preference

Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.

Reviews

11 reviews for this Gig
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    jerryjordan551

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Writing a Book with a lot of potential is not enough, we need a willing readers. I will offer you a favor hand it to the ladies. They will reduce your chances of Rejections and maximize your chances of getting an agent and make sure there are no plot holes. Also, the feeling of having your first readers...

    Up to $50

    Price

    3 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
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    jerryjordan551

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Kath and cade again elevated the remaining part of my Writing from roughly good to exceptional.Both had different opinions and thoughts about some of the same things/pace /structure of the story which helped me to see how different readers would react. They also gave me a Sample Line Edit for my first 3 chapters ( THANK YOU FOR THAT)

    Up to $50

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    3 days

    Duration

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    teresamarie_23

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    It took only a few sentences into the review to see that this was done by someone who truly cared about my story and was dedicated enough to show me how to make it stronger. She's given me inspiration and some work to do. And that's exactly what I was looking for.

    Up to $50

    Price

    10 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
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  • T

    teresamarie_23

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    She is my go-to person. She provides more than a review; she provides a training manual. I am new to writing, so sometimes I my intentions are not clear on the page, but she catches it, every time. She takes the time to understand!

    Up to $50

    Price

    10 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • S

    sam_bennettbook

    AU

    Australia

    5

    Great detailed feedback with actionable insights. Each recommendation was clearly explained, practical to implement, and tied back to real improvements rather than vague theory. Really appreciated the balance between identifying opportunities for improvement while also explaining what was already working well. Thank you.

    $50-$100

    Price

    11 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
Reviews

11 reviews for this Gig
5.0

(11)
(0)
(0)
(0)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    5
  • Value of delivery
    5
Sort By
Most relevant
  • J
    image-docs

    jerryjordan551

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Writing a Book with a lot of potential is not enough, we need a willing readers. I will offer you a favor hand it to the ladies. They will reduce your chances of Rejections and maximize your chances of getting an agent and make sure there are no plot holes. Also, the feeling of having your first readers...

    Up to $50

    Price

    3 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • J
    image-docs

    jerryjordan551

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Kath and cade again elevated the remaining part of my Writing from roughly good to exceptional.Both had different opinions and thoughts about some of the same things/pace /structure of the story which helped me to see how different readers would react. They also gave me a Sample Line Edit for my first 3 chapters ( THANK YOU FOR THAT)

    Up to $50

    Price

    3 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • T

    teresamarie_23

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    It took only a few sentences into the review to see that this was done by someone who truly cared about my story and was dedicated enough to show me how to make it stronger. She's given me inspiration and some work to do. And that's exactly what I was looking for.

    Up to $50

    Price

    10 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • T

    teresamarie_23

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    She is my go-to person. She provides more than a review; she provides a training manual. I am new to writing, so sometimes I my intentions are not clear on the page, but she catches it, every time. She takes the time to understand!

    Up to $50

    Price

    10 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • S

    sam_bennettbook

    AU

    Australia

    5

    Great detailed feedback with actionable insights. Each recommendation was clearly explained, practical to implement, and tied back to real improvements rather than vague theory. Really appreciated the balance between identifying opportunities for improvement while also explaining what was already working well. Thank you.

    $50-$100

    Price

    11 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No