I will review and strengthen your law school personal statement as a yale law grad

Most clients start with the Feedback Memo unless I tell them upfront that their draft is strong enough to skip ahead in the process to more intensive line-editing. Please send me a copy of your essay so I can advise on which package is appropriate.

I have a J.D. from Yale Law School, where I was a Coker Fellow (1L legal writing instructor). I was admitted to every T-10 law school, with full-ride scholarships at Chicago (Rubenstein), NYU (RTK), Columbia (Hamilton), Penn Carey (Levy), UVA (Karsh-Dillard), Michigan (Darrow) & Duke (Mordecai).

In recent cycles, clients I have worked with have reported admissions to Harvard, UChicago, Columbia, NYU, Penn Carey, UVA, Michigan, Northwestern, Cornell, UCLA, BU, UT Austin, USC Gould, Cardozo, and Osgoode (Canada) — often with LSAT scores and GPAs below those schools' medians.

I specialize in law school admissions judgment, not just copyediting. Most law school editing gigs on Fiverr are offered by generalist editors, whereas I am a Yale Law School student with deep knowledge of the legal profession, and I work exclusively on law school admissions.

When I conclude, based on my professional judgment, that an essay is weakening your application, I share those impressions with you directly and propose new approaches. My goal is the strongest application, not preserving your existing draft at all costs.

Yes. Rough drafts are often best suited for the Premium or Standard packages. Send me a copy of what you have, and I will advise. I can help you identify the strongest topic, restructure the narrative, deepen your reflection, and develop a clearer “why law.”

Personal statements, HLS statements of perspective and purpose, diversity/background statements, supplemental essays, "Why X School" statements, scholarship essays, résumés, LOCIs, and addenda. For character & fitness addenda, my advice is limited to presentation rather than disclosure requirements.

8. I do not use AI to write client essays. As I edit, I I will flag language that sounds generic, artificial, overengineered, or unlike a natural applicant voice. I reserve the write to decline to review an essay that appears to be substantially written by AI.

I do not ghostwrite. I will give you detailed guidance on topic, structure, and content while ensuring that the essay remains your work and your voice.

My prices are firm. They reflect the amount of individualized review each project requires and are intentionally priced below comparable law school admissions consulting services.