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I will give professional feedback on your story or screenplay
South Africa
I speak English
beta read your first chapter
am a published Sci-Fi, Dystopian, and Fantasy author writing under the pen name Katleho B. Malope . As the author of Atomic Fall, I specialize in deep world-building, high-stakes pacing, and character...
About this Gig
Writer, screenwriter, and editor hereI've written cinematic-level stories and built deep character work. I know what makes a story land and what makes readers/viewers tune out.
What you get:
Line edits for clarity, pacing, and flow
Character consistency and development notes
Plot/structure feedback (what's working, what's not, and why)
Honest, constructive critiquenot just "looks good!"
Whether it's a short story, screenplay scene, or chapterI'll treat it like it matters, because good stories deserve good editors.
Basic package: Up to 1,500 words, line edit + brief notes
Need a full screenplay or longer manuscript? Message me to discuss.
Language:
English
Content Type:
Book
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Poetry
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Short story
Genre:
Action
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Adventure
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Comic book
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Fanfiction
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Science
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Fantasy
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What file formats do you accept?
Word docs (.docx), Google Docs links, PDFs, or plain text. If it's a screenplay, standard formats like Final Draft (.fdx) or PDF work too.
Will you tell me if my story is good or bad?
I'll give honest, constructive feedback — what's working, what isn't, and why, with specific suggestions. No empty praise, no harsh takedowns.
Do you edit non-English work?
English only for now.
Can you edit genre fiction (sci-fi, fantasy, horror, etc.)?
Yes — I work across genres and can adapt notes to genre conventions.
What if my piece is longer than the package word count?
Order the "additional words" extra, or message me first and I can quote a custom price for longer pieces.
Do you guarantee I'll get published/accepted?
No one can guarantee that — but I'll make sure your piece is as strong as it can be before you submit it. That last one is worth including even though it seems obvious — it sets expectations and protects you from disappointed buyers leaving bad reviews over outcomes you can't control.
