I will proofread your ttrpg and provide feedback

Are you a game designer with a new RPG idea? Do you need feedback on your game's mechanics, story, or setting? I can help!

I am an RPG expert with over 15 years of experience in the industry. I have helped games go from idea to publishing, and I have playtested numerous RPGs. I can provide you with detailed feedback on your game, and I can also help you playtest your game with a group of experienced players.

I offer a variety of services, including:

• Mechanics feedback: I can help review your game's mechanics, make sure they are clear and easy to understand, and ensure that they are fun to play.
• Story feedback: I can help you develop your game's story, make sure it is engaging and interesting, and ensure that it is well-paced.
• Setting feedback: I can help you create your game's setting, make sure it is believable and immersive, and ensure that it is full of interesting things for players to explore.

Playtesting is a separate consultation. After reviewing your RPG, we can discuss the prices for that service. I can help you playtest your game with a group of experienced players, gather feedback, and make sure your game is coherent and fun to play.