I will critique and beta read your fantasy or science fiction manuscript

Ireland

I speak English, Chinese

37 orders completed

Editing and design excellence

I'm a native English editor, proofreader, and beta reader. I'm Chartered Institute Editors and Proofreaders (CIEP) qualified. I have edited fiction and academic works, and I also translate from Chines...

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About this Gig

Are you writing an epic fantasy, a thrilling sci-fi adventure, or something in between? I'm here to help you take your story to the next level. I'm highly knowledgeable and well read in SFF genres and subgenres.


As a dedicated alpha and beta reader with a passion for speculative fiction, I provide thoughtful, reader-focused feedback to help you strengthen your manuscript before publication or querying.

What you'll get:

  • Honest, constructive feedback from an experienced SFF reader
  • In-depth comments on plot, pacing, and structure
  • Analysis of worldbuilding, magic systems, and internal logic
  • Character development insights (motivation, arcs, consistency)
  • Notes on dialogue, tone, and immersion
  • Identification of confusing sections, plot holes, or inconsistencies
  • In-line comments (in Word)
  • A summary report with actionable suggestions

My specialties:

  • Epic, high, heroic, low, and urban SFF subgenres
  • Space opera & hard sci-fi
  • Dystopian & speculative fiction
  • Weird fiction
  • Sword & Sorcery


Whether you're building a complex magic system or exploring futuristic technology, Ill help ensure your story resonates with readers.


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Genre:

Action

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Adventure

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Horror/ thriller

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Literary fiction

Language:

English

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