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I will beta read your story and give professional feedback
Editing Beta Reading Proofreading
I am a native English speaking literary agent born in the United States. I do beta reading, book editing, and proofreading for all categories of fiction.
I’ve provided editorial feedback to authors ...
About this Gig
PLEASE NOTE: All feedback will be delivered via Google Docs (in-line comments), and a reader's report will be delivered via PDF.
I offer professional beta reading for fiction writers who want honest feedback from someone with industry experience. I'm a literary agent with experience evaluating fiction across genres. My feedback is practical and tailored to your needs. Whether you're preparing for submission, self-publishing, or looking to strengthen your writing, I will help your story reach its full potential.
WHAT YOU'LL RECIEVE:
IN-LINE COMMENTS ON YOUR MANUSCRIPT
- Real-time reader thoughts: what grabbed me, what confused me, what surprised me, etc.
- Notes on plot clarity, pacing, and believability
- Dialogue and character consistency
- Flags for clichés or moments that dont land
- Comments on word choice or awkward phrasing
AN HONEST, COMPREHENSIVE AUDIENCE APPEAL ASSESSMENT COVERING:
- Plot structure and pacing
- Character development and emotional payoff
- Story strengths and areas that need a second look
- Writing style, tone, and voice
- Any questions or concerns a reader might have after finishing your story
Genre:
Other
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
How do you deliver work?
All feedback will be delivered via Google Docs (inline comments), and an audience appeal assessment will be delivered in a PDF.
Do you accept mature or explicit content?
Yes, I am open to mature/explicit content. It must not include anything that violates Fiverr's content policy.
Can I book you for longer projects?
Yes. I occasionally work on projects up to 100k words. Please message me first so that we can discuss timeline, needs, and pricing.
Is this confidential?
Absolutely. I do not share your writing or discuss your project with anyone else. Your work stays private.
Do you use AI?
No. All work is done by me.
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M mojigoji93
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Kaylyn was so thorough yet so quick with her notes. She was able to point out details that I had been blind-sided by. Totally worth it!
$100-$200
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2 weeks
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M mojigoji93
United States
Kaylyn was so thorough yet so quick with her notes. She was able to point out details that I had been blind-sided by. Totally worth it!
$100-$200
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?
