I will critique your query package for literary agents

Preparing to query literary agents? I'll provide a detailed, constructive critique of your query letter, helping you strengthen your hook, clarify your story, sharpen your stakes and make your submission as compelling as possible. As a UK agented author with a Creative Writing background, I understand both the writing and querying sides of the process.

I particularly welcome LGBTQ+ fiction and have a special interest in sapphic fiction, queer romance and inclusive storytelling.

For the most organised feedback, I recommend submitting all materials as one Word document, clearly separated into sections. If you prefer to upload separate files, that's absolutely fine.