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I will beta read your wlw sapphic or paranomal romance novel
I will beta read your sapphic romance or romantasy novel
I’m kendra, a beta read your sapphic romance or romantasy novel, short stories, manuscripts, and other written works. I focus on plot, characters, pacing, clarity, consistency, and overall reader expe...
About this Gig
Looking for a beta reader who actually understands the wlw, sapphic, and paranormal romance space not just someone reading for typos?
I'll read your manuscript as an engaged reader first, giving you honest, constructive feedback on what's working and what isn't before you send it to an editor, agent, or the world.
What I focus on:
- Chemistry and romantic tension between your leads
- Pacing where the story drags or rushes
- Character likability and believability
- Plot holes and continuity issues
- Whether the emotional beats land
- Genre expectations for sapphic/wlw and paranormal romance specifically
What you'll receive:
A written reader report covering overall impressions, strengths, and areas to improve
Honest feedback no empty praise, no harshness, just what a real reader would notice
(Standard & Premium) Inline comments throughout your manuscript
I'm not here to line-edit your grammar I'm here to react as your target reader will, so you know what's landing before you publish or query.
Send me your manuscript, tell me a bit about your story, and let's get started.
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What genres do you read?
My focus is wlw/sapphic romance and paranormal romance, but I'm happy to discuss other romance subgenres too just message me first.
Will you fix my grammar and spelling?
This gig is for reader-perspective feedback (plot, pacing, characters, emotional impact) not line editing. I'll flag anything glaring, but grammar isn't the focus here.
Do you need the full manuscript, or can I send an excerpt?
Either works. Full manuscripts get the deepest feedback; excerpts (first chapters) are great if you want early direction before finishing your draft.
What format should I send my manuscript in?
Word document (.docx) or Google Doc with comment access this lets me leave inline notes directly in your file.
Is my manuscript safe with you?
Yes. I don't share, copy, or use your work anywhere else. It stays between us.
I don't have reviews to judge you by why should I trust you?
Fair question! I'm new to Fiverr, which means you're getting genuine attention and effort on early orders while I build my reputation not a rushed job squeezed between dozens of other clients.
Can I request specific things to focus on?
Absolutely tell me your concerns (e.g. "does the slow burn work?" or "is the paranormal element believable?") and I'll prioritize those in my report
What if my book has explicit/spicy content?
hat's fine just let me know the heat level in advance so I know what to expect.
