I will beta read your manuscript

Have you recently finished your story and looking to self-publish? Perhaps youd like another pair of eyes before submitting to literary agents?

Whether youve written a romance romp, an epic fantasy or out of this world science fiction, I'll offer honest and constructive feedback, including in line commentary so you can see feedback in context and a reader report at the end of the document, explaining what's working and where readers might want more.

I welcome work that deals with LGBTQ+ themes and can help ensure that this is done authentically.

Feedback will cover:

• Character development so the people come alive on the page.
• Dialogue and readability to avoid awkward moments that break the readers focus.
• Pacing and plot flow to make sure the tension keeps readers turning the page.
• Emotional depth and accuracy so that the heart of your story is felt by the characters and the reader.
• World-building for the speculative worlds but also for ensuring that real-world settings remain grounded and consistent.
• Overall reader experience so you know what they might think of your work.

. Let me help you get your novel where its needed for you and your readers.