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I will beta read your fantasy manuscript with actionable feedback
Providing honest and detailed beta reader feedback!
I’m a beta reader specializing in fantasy fiction, and I also help bookish businesses build and manage their presence on Instagram.
As a beta reader, I pay close attention to what makes readers curio...
About this Gig
Message before placing an order!
I read your manuscript as a genuine reader and give honest, detailed feedback the kind that's hard to get from people who know you or your story.
Three levels of feedback, depending on how deep you need to go:
Story Analysis up to 40k words
- Inline comments (reactions, questions, confusion or delight)
- Structured report on plot, characters, and pacing
- Best for a first honest read on your manuscript
Chapter-by-Chapter up to 80k words
- Everything in Story Analysis
- Individual feedback per chapter, tracking where the story works or loses the reader
- Best for granular, scene-level feedback
Light Developmental Edit up to 120k words
- Everything in Chapter-by-Chapter
- Full developmental report: plot, subplots, arcs, world-building, pacing, unresolved threads
- Concrete suggestions for revision
- Best for authors prepping to query or publish
Not sure which fits? Story Analysis for a first read. Chapter-by-Chapter for scene-level detail. Light Developmental Edit if you need both diagnosis and fix.
Expect specific, actionable feedback not vague praise.
Genre:
Fantasy
Language:
English
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Urdu
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
Which package should I choose if I'm about to query agents or self-publish?
Light Developmental Edit. It's built for that stage — it doesn't just flag issues, it gives you direction on how to revise before you submit.
What if my manuscript is longer than 120k words?
Message me before ordering with your word count. I can extend any package for an additional fee per 1,000 words.
What file formats do you accept?
Word documents (.docx), with inline comments enabled for editing.
How do you deliver feedback, is it a document, comments in my file, or both?
Both. You'll get inline comments directly in your manuscript, plus a separate written report depending on your package.
What genres do you read?
Fantasy and all its subgenres (epic, urban, YA, romantasy, etc.). Please note: I don't read explicit sexual content or smut, if your manuscript includes these scenes, let's discuss before ordering so I can flag or skip them appropriately.
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K kieranadam
United Kingdom
Excellent Beta Reader. Is honest and not afraid to point out issues that should be pointed out. One of the best I've worked with!
$50-$100
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?K kieranadam
United Kingdom
Absolutely brilliant! One of the best beta readers I've ever used! I don't say this lightly, as I have used quite a few on this platform. Laiba covered everything I could've asked for and more (considering she also read the first book in the series before beta reading this one). Great constructive feedback...
$200-$400
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5 weeks
Duration
Helpful?F flynnforecastle
United States
She beta read the second draft of my first novel and her report was beyond insightful and eye opening to new tasks I need to tend to with my third draft. Her attention to detail and little things that matter were more than astonishing and very needed. I look forward to working with her in my future projects.
$50-$100
Price
4 days
Duration
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K kieranadam
United Kingdom
Excellent Beta Reader. Is honest and not afraid to point out issues that should be pointed out. One of the best I've worked with!
$50-$100
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?K kieranadam
United Kingdom
Absolutely brilliant! One of the best beta readers I've ever used! I don't say this lightly, as I have used quite a few on this platform. Laiba covered everything I could've asked for and more (considering she also read the first book in the series before beta reading this one). Great constructive feedback...
$200-$400
Price
5 weeks
Duration
Helpful?F flynnforecastle
United States
She beta read the second draft of my first novel and her report was beyond insightful and eye opening to new tasks I need to tend to with my third draft. Her attention to detail and little things that matter were more than astonishing and very needed. I look forward to working with her in my future projects.
$50-$100
Price
4 days
Duration
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