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I will beta read your fantasy or scifi novel with detailed feedback
Jewellery designer & creative chameleon blending fantasy elegance with modern design. From custom jewellery to brand visuals to story edits—I help ideas shine in any form.
About this Gig
Are you writing fantasy or sci-fi and not sure if your story is actually working?
I'll read your manuscript as a real reader and tell you what's landing, what's confusing, and where things start to fall apart.
I mostly work with speculative fiction, so I pay close attention to things like:
- worldbuilding (is it immersive or overwhelming?)
- character arcs (do they feel real or flat?)
- pacing (where does it drag or lose tension?)
What you'll get:
- honest reactions (no sugarcoating, but not harsh for no reason)
- clear suggestions you can actually use
- a structured report so you're not left guessing
I come at this as both a storyteller and a designer, so I look at how everything fits together, not just individual scenes.
If you want feedback that helps you actually improve the story, I'd love to read your work.
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Genre:
Science fiction
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Fantasy
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What genres do you read?
I specialize in fiction, particularly fantasy, science fiction, and speculative fiction. I’m open to other genres as long as they’re fiction-focused, but I do not accept nonfiction, erotica, or horror-heavy works.
What kind of feedback will I receive?
You’ll get honest, constructive feedback on pacing, plot clarity, character arcs, world-building, and overall flow. Depending on the package, this may include inline comments, a summary report, and/or chapter-by-chapter notes.
Do you fix grammar or spelling errors?
Nope! I’m a beta reader, not a proofreader. I focus on story, structure, and reader experience—but I do offer a sample line edit as an extra if you’d like feedback on writing style or clarity.
Will you mark up my document directly?
For short works, I may leave inline comments or margin notes (PDF or Word), but most feedback is delivered as a separate document with my reactions and suggestions. Let me know what you prefer!
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azakaela
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Lakshaya really came through and delivered some incredibly valuable feedback for my sci fi / cosmic horror novel's manuscript. They pointed out what was working well and what to keep doing and reinforce as well as suggested areas that could use improvement, polish and clarification. It's great to be...
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A azakaela
United States
Lakshaya really came through and delivered some incredibly valuable feedback for my sci fi / cosmic horror novel's manuscript. They pointed out what was working well and what to keep doing and reinforce as well as suggested areas that could use improvement, polish and clarification. It's great to be...
Up to $50
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?
