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I will beta read and provide honest, actionable feedback
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Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.
What people loved about this freelancer
franktether
United States
Lameez did a wonderful job on Beneath a Broken Dawn. Her in-line reactions were a joy to read. I could see exactly where the story landed for her (Yogel, Chigiri's...
xxwidow
United States
Fifty-one inline comments and every one of them anchored to a specific line. She marked where she stopped, where she went back and reread, and why — which is...
kaypro1221
United States
Another gold standard beta reader, Lameez never shies away from telling where the manuscript looses immersion. She is excellent at narrative structure review...
xxwidow
United States
Lameez gave my novel a careful, honest read, with more than a hundred inline reactions that showed me exactly where she was hooked, moved, or lost. The places...
floskula777
Croatia
Lameez delivered a thoughtful, honest and well-organized beta read of my novel. She clearly read the manuscript carefully, pointed to specific pages, and gave...
About this Gig
Do you want honest, insightful feedback that helps you elevate your story?
Hi, I'm Lameez, and I believe in keeping the soul of your story intact while sharpening its spine. I'll provide honest feedback on your plot, character arcs, pacing, all to ensure your manuscript delivers the emotional and narrative impact you envision.
I specialize in fiction that is character-driven, emotionally grounded, and immersive but I've worked across genres, tones, and styles. If your story matters to you, it matters to me.
Here's what you can expect:
- Honest, constructive feedback
- A professional, collaborative tone never condescending
- A detailed feedback report with actionable notes
- Thoughtful insights into character, worldbuilding, narrative voice, and more
Whether you're on your first draft or your fifth, I can help you get to the next level with clarity and confidence.
Let's bring out the best in your book!
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English
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FAQ
Do you offer line editing and track changes services for manuscripts?
My primary focus is on providing feedback and insights on your manuscript, rather than conducting line edits and tracking changes. While I will pay attention to the overall story, plot, and character development, my role is not primarily concerned with addressing typos or grammar.
Are you open to the task of rewriting my current manuscript?
Regrettably, I do not offer rewriting services for existing works.
Are you familiar with and experienced in reading nonfiction literature?
Certainly, I am open to beta reading a wide range of stories and genres.
Do you provide customized offers for manuscripts that slightly exceed the word count limit of a specific package?
Certainly! If you reach out to me in advance and provide the details of your manuscript, including the word count, I can create a custom offer tailored to your specific needs. This offer will be presented to you for your consideration and further discussion.
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393 reviews for this Gig
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franktether
United States
Ongoing collaborationLameez did a wonderful job on Beneath a Broken Dawn. Her in-line reactions were a joy to read. I could see exactly where the story landed for her (Yogel, Chigiri's roar, the "remains" scare in chapter 18), and that is just as valuable to a writer as the critiques. Her report was thoughtful, specific...
$100-$200
Price
13 days
Duration
Helpful?X xxwidow
United States
Ongoing collaborationFifty-one inline comments and every one of them anchored to a specific line. She marked where she stopped, where she went back and reread, and why — which is exactly what I asked for and what almost nobody actually delivers. She found four things four previous reviews had missed, including a flat contradiction...
$50
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?K kaypro1221
United States
Ongoing collaborationAnother gold standard beta reader, Lameez never shies away from telling where the manuscript looses immersion. She is excellent at narrative structure review and following the development of characterization. She provides her report in a timely manner and her suggestions make the revision process that much easier.
$50
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?X xxwidow
United States
Ongoing collaborationLameez gave my novel a careful, honest read, with more than a hundred inline reactions that showed me exactly where she was hooked, moved, or lost. The places where she got confused turned out to be real problems, and fixing them made the book clearer. When I asked follow-up questions, her straight answers...
$50-$100
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?F floskula777
Croatia
Ongoing collaborationLameez delivered a thoughtful, honest and well-organized beta read of my novel. She clearly read the manuscript carefully, pointed to specific pages, and gave me balanced feedback on pacing, characters and continuity, along with what worked well. Her notes on rushed chapters and on how the story reads...
$50-$100
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?
Reviews
393 reviews for this Gig
| (360) | ||
| (23) | ||
| (6) | ||
| (3) | ||
| (1) |
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- Value of delivery
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F franktether
United States
Ongoing collaborationLameez did a wonderful job on Beneath a Broken Dawn. Her in-line reactions were a joy to read. I could see exactly where the story landed for her (Yogel, Chigiri's roar, the "remains" scare in chapter 18), and that is just as valuable to a writer as the critiques. Her report was thoughtful, specific...
$100-$200
Price
13 days
Duration
Helpful?X xxwidow
United States
Ongoing collaborationFifty-one inline comments and every one of them anchored to a specific line. She marked where she stopped, where she went back and reread, and why — which is exactly what I asked for and what almost nobody actually delivers. She found four things four previous reviews had missed, including a flat contradiction...
$50
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?K kaypro1221
United States
Ongoing collaborationAnother gold standard beta reader, Lameez never shies away from telling where the manuscript looses immersion. She is excellent at narrative structure review and following the development of characterization. She provides her report in a timely manner and her suggestions make the revision process that much easier.
$50
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?X xxwidow
United States
Ongoing collaborationLameez gave my novel a careful, honest read, with more than a hundred inline reactions that showed me exactly where she was hooked, moved, or lost. The places where she got confused turned out to be real problems, and fixing them made the book clearer. When I asked follow-up questions, her straight answers...
$50-$100
Price
8 days
Duration
Helpful?F floskula777
Croatia
Ongoing collaborationLameez delivered a thoughtful, honest and well-organized beta read of my novel. She clearly read the manuscript carefully, pointed to specific pages, and gave me balanced feedback on pacing, characters and continuity, along with what worked well. Her notes on rushed chapters and on how the story reads...
$50-$100
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?
