I will critique your first chapter

5.0
5.0

United States

I speak English

406 orders completed

Indie author helping other indies publish their stories

All my life I've been an avid reader who would pick up just about any book I could get my hands on. Through the years, I've found a love of fantasy, YA, romance, and sci-fi in all age categories. ...

Level 2

Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.

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About this Gig

*Please contact before booking to ensure availability*


Your first chapter is exactly where your readers will either latch on to your story or not. Let's keep them reading!


I'll read through your first chapter and send you a thorough follow-up report as well as comment throughout your document to give you real-time reading thoughts. I, as a reader, will be completely honest. I've been an avid reader all my life and want to help you make your story great.


You'll get my honest reader opinion, as well as my critical writer's eye. I've been beta reading, alpha reading, and critiquing fellow writers' manuscripts for years.


If you were to ask any of my critique partners, they would tell you that I'm known for my compliment sandwich. I know how hard it is to turn over your work to someone else and I'm not looking to crush you. I want to elevate your writing. To me, that doesn't just mean letting you know what's wrong. It also means letting you know what's right. I will tell you what I like as well as what I think needs work. I want you to walk away satisfied!


I'm not currently offering samples on beta reads or services for non-fiction works. Sorry for any inconvenience.

Language:

English

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    daxhughes

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    5

    Thank you for the feedback. Great advice and also encouraging! Helped me a lot to know where to go with the plot you were great to work with and your feedback was excellent.

    Up to $50

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    3 weeks

    Duration

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    huntrss

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Tessy is wonderful to work with and I deeply appreciate the feedback she provided on my chapters. It's so helpful to get a second pair of eyes on your work! I look foreword to working with her again!

    Up to $50

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    13 days

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    huntrss

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    I've really loved working with Tessy. She's thorough and professional, all the while being that little bit of encouragement that you need! Once again, I would definitely recommend this seller. :)

    Up to $50

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    12 days

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    douglascapper

    US

    United States

    5

    Fantastic beta read and feedback. This was a huge help to my project!

    Up to $50

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    11 days

    Duration

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    huntrss

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Tessy was very communicative and thorough in her review of my chapter! I am very happy with the results. She answered all the questions I had for her and made sure to break everything I asked for down section by section. I would definitely recommend this seller!

    Up to $50

    Price

    7 days

    Duration

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27 reviews for this Gig
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  • Seller communication level
    5
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    5
  • Value of delivery
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    daxhughes

    US

    United States

    5

    Thank you for the feedback. Great advice and also encouraging! Helped me a lot to know where to go with the plot you were great to work with and your feedback was excellent.

    Up to $50

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
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  • H
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    huntrss

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Tessy is wonderful to work with and I deeply appreciate the feedback she provided on my chapters. It's so helpful to get a second pair of eyes on your work! I look foreword to working with her again!

    Up to $50

    Price

    13 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • H
    image-docs

    huntrss

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    I've really loved working with Tessy. She's thorough and professional, all the while being that little bit of encouragement that you need! Once again, I would definitely recommend this seller. :)

    Up to $50

    Price

    12 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • D
    image-docs

    douglascapper

    US

    United States

    5

    Fantastic beta read and feedback. This was a huge help to my project!

    Up to $50

    Price

    11 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • H
    image-docs

    huntrss

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Tessy was very communicative and thorough in her review of my chapter! I am very happy with the results. She answered all the questions I had for her and made sure to break everything I asked for down section by section. I would definitely recommend this seller!

    Up to $50

    Price

    7 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No