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I will review your italian story and help improve plot, characters and dialogue
Translation, Social Media Content, Italian Lessons
Hi! I'm Laura, a native Italian speaker with a degree in Languages and Literatures and a C1 level of English. I offer translation & proofreading (IT-EN), social media content creation, and Italian con...
About this Gig
Do you have a story you love but feel something isn't quite working?
I offer developmental editing in Italian not grammar correction, but a deep look at the heart of your story: how it's structured, how your characters connect, what slows the pace, and what keeps readers turning the page.
What I look at:
- Plot structure and overall story arc
- Character consistency and relationships
- Pacing scenes that drag or rush
- Moments where reader attention drops
- Connections between subplots and main story
What I don't do: grammar, spelling, or punctuation correction this service is purely about storytelling and narrative structure.
Who this is for: writers at any level working on short stories, novels, fanfiction, or any Italian-language narrative project.
Not sure which package is right for you? Send me a message before ordering I'm happy to help you choose."
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Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
Do you correct the grammar as well?
No, this service is purely about storytelling and narrative structure.
Do you also work on fanfiction stories or not published stories?
Yes, I work on every narrative text in Italian, published or not, on every genre.
In which format do I have to send you the manoscript?
I prefer Google Docs o Word (.docx), so I can leave my comments directly on the text. I also accept PDFs for basic packets
What happens if my story exceeds the number of words in the packet?
Contact me before making your order so we can agree on a personalized price for longer texts
