I will create visual manuscript diagnostic report

Finished your manuscript? Before you publish or query, find out honestly what's working and what isn't.

I provide a visual diagnostic report showing where your story succeeds, where readers may lose interest, and what to revise.

Plot& Pacing Graph

Tension scored beat-by-beat, with relationship milestones overlaid so you can see whether your romance and plot are moving together or pulling apart.

Character Arc& Behaviour Map

Both leads tracked in parallel, with flags for moments where behaviour doesn't match their established wound, motivation, or arc.

Dialogue Effectiveness Scorecard

Voice differentiation, banter, subtext, and exposition load scored with specific scene references.

Who it's for:Clean romance (fade-to-black/closed-door/sweet), YA fiction, indie authors preparing to publish or query, and writers who want honest feedback, not cheerleading.

Content policy: Clean, wholesome fiction only. No on-page sexual content or graphic violence. Please disclose your manuscript's heat level and content warnings before ordering. I reserve the right to cancel orders outside this scope.

Turnaround:Message me before ordering if your manuscript exceeds the wordcount limit for your package