I will be your developmental editor for fiction

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5.0

Croatia

I speak English

500 orders completed

Developmental editor, copy editor, proofreader, and beta reader

Hi there! I'm Lucy, and having collaborated with various agents and publishers across the UK, I've developed a keen eye for what makes manuscripts stand out in today's competitive market. What sets me...

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Hi there, and thank you for considering my gig!

After years in the publishing industry, I've developed a sixth sense for what makes a narrative truly captivating and I'd love to bring that expertise to your project.


I'm often asked why consider a developmental edit? Well, it's the critical stepping stone that can elevate your manuscript from a promising draft to a submission-ready gem. Whether you're preparing to query agents or planning to self-publish, this comprehensive approach addresses the fundamental elements.

When we work together, you'll receive:

A thoughtful, in-depth developmental report that shows your strengths while providing clear pathways for growth.


Also, many detailed in-line comments throughout your manuscript, offering specific suggestions right where you need them, especially on:


  • Characters arcs
  • Keeping your distinctive voice while working on strong character POVs
  • Structure that enhances your narrative
  • Sorting out plot holes
  • Pacing, readability, and flow


I believe every manuscript has its own heartbeat, and I'm committed to helping you find and strengthen yours.

Have questions or need a custom package? I'm just a message away!

Genre:

History

Literary fiction

Language:

English

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    farragun

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    Philippines

    5

    This is a partial feedback for the first half of the book but i already saw a lot of really insightful feedback. Definitely looking forward for the rest of the report and working with you again.

    $200-$400

    Price

    11 days

    Duration

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    paulnmason

    CA

    Canada

    5

    Lucija marked up my manuscript in a thoroughly professional manner, indicating what she liked and what she felt needed attention. While, inevitably, I didn't agree with ALL of her comments, I saw that they came from a place of editorial integrity and reflected what a considerable segment of my potential...

    $200-$400

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    2 months

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    natasha_el_88

    CA

    Canada

    5

    Fantastic experience from start to finish. The feedback was detailed, professional, and incredibly helpful. I received thoughtful developmental notes that highlighted both strengths and areas for improvement. The editor clearly understands the genre and provided actionable suggestions that will make my book stronger. Highly recommended.

    $400-$600

    Price

    8 weeks

    Duration

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    theojh90

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Working with Lucy again was a no brainer. Her advice is so insightful and she understands the story I'm trying to tell expertly. I will definitely be working with her again on all of my projects in the future :)

    $100-$200

    Price

    5 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • S

    s4ltysilver

    Repeat Client

    GB

    United Kingdom

    5

    Amazing work and incredible professional service. Do yourself and your project a favour and hire to work on your manuscript. 5 stars and thank you.

    $100-$200

    Price

    7 weeks

    Duration

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Reviews

77 reviews for this Gig
5.0

(77)
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Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    5
  • Value of delivery
    5
Sort By
Most relevant
  • F
    image-docs

    farragun

    Repeat Client

    PH

    Philippines

    5

    This is a partial feedback for the first half of the book but i already saw a lot of really insightful feedback. Definitely looking forward for the rest of the report and working with you again.

    $200-$400

    Price

    11 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • P

    paulnmason

    CA

    Canada

    5

    Lucija marked up my manuscript in a thoroughly professional manner, indicating what she liked and what she felt needed attention. While, inevitably, I didn't agree with ALL of her comments, I saw that they came from a place of editorial integrity and reflected what a considerable segment of my potential...

    $200-$400

    Price

    2 months

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • N

    natasha_el_88

    CA

    Canada

    5

    Fantastic experience from start to finish. The feedback was detailed, professional, and incredibly helpful. I received thoughtful developmental notes that highlighted both strengths and areas for improvement. The editor clearly understands the genre and provided actionable suggestions that will make my book stronger. Highly recommended.

    $400-$600

    Price

    8 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • T

    theojh90

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Working with Lucy again was a no brainer. Her advice is so insightful and she understands the story I'm trying to tell expertly. I will definitely be working with her again on all of my projects in the future :)

    $100-$200

    Price

    5 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • S

    s4ltysilver

    Repeat Client

    GB

    United Kingdom

    5

    Amazing work and incredible professional service. Do yourself and your project a favour and hire to work on your manuscript. 5 stars and thank you.

    $100-$200

    Price

    7 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No