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I will edit and revise your romance novel
For writers whose words will change people's minds
Good to meet you! I’m a writer, ghostwriter, editor, and creative who is MN-born, SoCal-grown, NYU-educated, and now, Chicago-based. In both editing and ghostwriting, I’ve done a little bit of everyth...
Level 2
Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.
About this Gig
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I LOVE LOVE, and romance truly takes the cake as my favorite genre to edit. I love the drama, the will-they-won't-they, the rising and falling tension. My editorial services are designed to meet you where you're at on your manuscript and get you ready to share your story with the world.
I offer three levels of service to my clients:
The Edit level includes copy editing and proofing, as well as attention to voice consistency throughout. This is a standard final edit for those of you who feel your manuscript just needs some final touches.
The Revise level is perfect for writers who want to be publication-ready quickly but who know there's still a lot of work to be done on their book. I will rewrite problem sentences, fix up the flow, and have a clean, clear copy of your manuscript ready to go to the presses quickly.
The Develop level is perfect for career writers who want to go through the learning process of making their book better themselves. I will provide copy editing and big-picture developmental comments on each page, coaching you towards the best version of your book.
Let's get your book looking its best!
Language:
English
Genre:
Fanfiction
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Humor/ entertainment
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Literary fiction
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Romance
Style guide:
Chicago Manual of Style (CMOS)
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
Clients I’ve worked with
W. W. Norton & Company
Books Publishing
Read manuscript submissions, wrote readers' reports, researched marketing info and sellable titles, communicated with Assistant Editor, inputted edits for book reprints.
May 2022-Jul 2022
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jfedba1422
Repeat Client
United States
The is the second part of a work in progress romance novella that LL has edited for me. Her work is outstanding. I am interested in comments and corrections on sentence structure, awkward phrasing, and story line pacing (Developmental Editing). She has provided so many good observations and suggestions. Thank you.
$50-$100
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?J jfedba1422
Repeat Client
United States
They provided a very thorough and detailed edit of my draft. This was just what I was looking for. As a new writer, I do not have the ability to see the issues, or the awareness to know what works and what does not. They provided notes on nearly every paragraph, and also made suggestions regarding overall clarity and chapter structure.
$50-$100
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?R rosy2020
United Kingdom
The communication and edits were exceptional! Will definitely use Lillians services again and would recommend to anyone. Thank you again! :)
$400-$600
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?E 
evak78
Germany
Lillian did an impressive job in line editing my manuscript. I had asked her to make sure that I used American English throughout and not British English as usual. She marked all the differences down to the smallest detail, and although I gave her a last-minute job, she was extremely friendly and helpful...
$200-$400
Price
12 days
Duration
Helpful?F 
flscala
Italy
Lilian revised the translation of my novel, originally written in Italian. We productively discusses which terms should remain in Italian language for optimal reader experience and comprehension. Will work with her for my next translated novels. Well done.
$800-$1,000
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?
Reviews
12 reviews for this Gig
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Rating Breakdown
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- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
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Most relevant
J jfedba1422
Repeat Client
United States
The is the second part of a work in progress romance novella that LL has edited for me. Her work is outstanding. I am interested in comments and corrections on sentence structure, awkward phrasing, and story line pacing (Developmental Editing). She has provided so many good observations and suggestions. Thank you.
$50-$100
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?J jfedba1422
Repeat Client
United States
They provided a very thorough and detailed edit of my draft. This was just what I was looking for. As a new writer, I do not have the ability to see the issues, or the awareness to know what works and what does not. They provided notes on nearly every paragraph, and also made suggestions regarding overall clarity and chapter structure.
$50-$100
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?R rosy2020
United Kingdom
The communication and edits were exceptional! Will definitely use Lillians services again and would recommend to anyone. Thank you again! :)
$400-$600
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?E evak78
Germany
Lillian did an impressive job in line editing my manuscript. I had asked her to make sure that I used American English throughout and not British English as usual. She marked all the differences down to the smallest detail, and although I gave her a last-minute job, she was extremely friendly and helpful...
$200-$400
Price
12 days
Duration
Helpful?F flscala
Italy
Lilian revised the translation of my novel, originally written in Italian. We productively discusses which terms should remain in Italian language for optimal reader experience and comprehension. Will work with her for my next translated novels. Well done.
$800-$1,000
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?
