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I will feedback on your story, plot and emotional impact
Graphic Designer, Print and Brand Design Specialist
I am a trained media designer with over 20 years of experience in print and graphic design.
I create clear, professional visual communication — from business cards and flyers to posters, ads, and full...
About this Gig
Some stories are well written.
Others actually stay with you.
If your story feels "almost there" but something is missing, I can help you find out why.
I focus on what really matters:
- emotional impact
- clarity of your narrative
- character depth
- pacing and structure
You will get:
- honest, constructive feedback
- clear explanations (not just opinions)
- actionable suggestions you can actually use
No generic comments. No fluff.
Just insight into what works - and what doesn't.
I approach stories the same way I approach design:
Not just how it looks but how it feels.
Please note:
This is a feedback and analysis service - not proofreading or rewriting.
Usage & Portfolio
I reserve the right to showcase completed work in my portfolio and on social media unless otherwise agreed.
Language:
English
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German
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
❓What exactly will I get?
You will receive detailed, structured feedback on your story, including strengths, weaknesses, and clear suggestions for improvement. I focus on emotional impact, clarity, characters, and overall structure.
❓Is this proofreading or editing?
No. This is not proofreading or grammar correction. I focus on story, structure, and emotional impact — not spelling or formatting.
❓What kind of texts do you work with?
Short stories, novel excerpts, scenes, or drafts in progress. Fiction works best, but feel free to message me if you’re unsure.
❓How detailed is the feedback?
That depends on the package you choose. Basic = quick insight Standard = detailed breakdown Premium = deep analysis with specific improvement suggestions
❓Will you rewrite parts of my story?
No full rewrites. However, I may include short example suggestions to show how something could be improved.
❓Can I send more words than included?
Yes. You can either book a higher package or add extra words when ordering.
❓What do you need from me to get started?
Your text (PDF or Word) and, if you want, a short note about what kind of feedback you’re looking for.
❓Can I contact you before ordering?
Yes, absolutely. If you’re unsure which package fits, just send me a message.
❓ Will my project be shown publicly?
I may showcase the work in my portfolio and on social media. If you prefer confidentiality, just let me know before we start.
