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I will developmental edit your picture book or children story
Developmental Editor, Writer, and Writing Coach
Hi, I'm Melissa! I'm a Developmental Editor and Writing Mentor.
I specialize in giving detailed editorial critiques, line-editing, proofreading, and self-publication for Children's Books, Young Adul...
Level 2
Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.
Highly Responsive
Known for exceptionally quick replies
What people loved about this freelancer
jenny_lelo
United States
Kate did an excellent job editing my story. This is the second time I’ve worked with her, and the process was even smoother because she understands the importance...
tw358830
United States
If you’re looking for someone to give you honest feedback on your children’s book, Melissa K is a perfect choice! I’m already looking fw to working with her in series 2!
jenny_lelo
United States
Melissa’s illustration technique is incredibly detailed and thoughtful. She pays close attention to every element, ensuring consistency and flow throughout...
tw358830
United States
Melissa what beyond my expectations! I’m thankful I’ve found someone that will give deep feedback in improving my mission! I will be working with her in future assignments!
jenny_lelo
United States
This is my third time working with Melissa, and I truly cannot put into words how thoughtfully she partners with you throughout the entire process. She listens...
About this Gig
** PLEASE CONTACT ME BEFORE PLACING AN ORDER **
You've written your story, now what? Whether you're publishing Traditionally or pursuing Self-Publishing, I'll help get your manuscript organized and to a finished product to send to an agent, publisher, or to progress to publish yourself.
What I Offer:
- Constructive Feedback. Detailed in-text edits, marginal comments and an overall review written at the end.
- Checking Word Choices. Review age-appropriateness, that words are at the correct reading-level. If you're unsure what reading-level your story is, I can let you know.
- This is only a critique. More services listed below.
Additional Services:
- Proofreading & Line Editing. I'll do a critique first (additional cost).
- Book Layout Info. Questions about the front and back matter?
- Art Directions. Questions about hiring an illustrator? Please note: I don't write art directions, but I'll critique them (additional cost).
- Illustration Critique. I'll critique a mock-up of your book, offering advice on the illustrations and layout (additional cost).
**For Chapter Books, please message me for a custom order.
Have a question? Message me! It'd be a pleasure to hear from you. =)
Language:
English
Content type:
Generic
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Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
Do You Offer Free Revisions?
Regretfully, I do not. I charge per manuscript. If you would like for me to look over another draft of your manuscript, it requires a new order.
Reviews
172 reviews for this Gig
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J jenny_lelo
Repeat Client
United States
Kate did an excellent job editing my story. This is the second time I’ve worked with her, and the process was even smoother because she understands the importance of consistency when building a series. She took the time to review my first book to ensure the tone, structure, and flow aligned with the...
Up to $50
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?T tw358830
Repeat Client
United States
If you’re looking for someone to give you honest feedback on your children’s book, Melissa K is a perfect choice! I’m already looking fw to working with her in series 2!
Up to $50
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?J jenny_lelo
Repeat Client
United States
Melissa’s illustration technique is incredibly detailed and thoughtful. She pays close attention to every element, ensuring consistency and flow throughout the entire book. I especially appreciated her critique process — she noticed things I hadn’t even seen and provided valuable suggestions that strengthened...
$50-$100
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?T tw358830
Repeat Client
United States
Melissa what beyond my expectations! I’m thankful I’ve found someone that will give deep feedback in improving my mission! I will be working with her in future assignments!
Up to $50
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?J jenny_lelo
Repeat Client
United States
This is my third time working with Melissa, and I truly cannot put into words how thoughtfully she partners with you throughout the entire process. She listens carefully to feedback, creates space for meaningful discussion, and helps bring your vision to life. Melissa consistently goes above and beyond...
Up to $50
Price
1 day
Duration
Helpful?
Reviews
172 reviews for this Gig
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| (2) | ||
| (0) | ||
| (0) | ||
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Rating Breakdown
- Seller communication level
- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
Sort By
Most relevant
J jenny_lelo
Repeat Client
United States
Kate did an excellent job editing my story. This is the second time I’ve worked with her, and the process was even smoother because she understands the importance of consistency when building a series. She took the time to review my first book to ensure the tone, structure, and flow aligned with the...
Up to $50
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?T tw358830
Repeat Client
United States
If you’re looking for someone to give you honest feedback on your children’s book, Melissa K is a perfect choice! I’m already looking fw to working with her in series 2!
Up to $50
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?J jenny_lelo
Repeat Client
United States
Melissa’s illustration technique is incredibly detailed and thoughtful. She pays close attention to every element, ensuring consistency and flow throughout the entire book. I especially appreciated her critique process — she noticed things I hadn’t even seen and provided valuable suggestions that strengthened...
$50-$100
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?T tw358830
Repeat Client
United States
Melissa what beyond my expectations! I’m thankful I’ve found someone that will give deep feedback in improving my mission! I will be working with her in future assignments!
Up to $50
Price
3 days
Duration
Helpful?J jenny_lelo
Repeat Client
United States
This is my third time working with Melissa, and I truly cannot put into words how thoughtfully she partners with you throughout the entire process. She listens carefully to feedback, creates space for meaningful discussion, and helps bring your vision to life. Melissa consistently goes above and beyond...
Up to $50
Price
1 day
Duration
Helpful?
