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I will be your fiction developmental editor
Developmental Editor and Author offering honest feedback on your book!
I'm a developmental editor and author who helps writers strengthen their stories at the structural level. I specialize in plot clarity, pacing, character arcs, and immersive worldbuilding. My feedback...
About this Gig
Are you struggling with a plot hole you can't fix? Worried your pacing drags in the middle? I provide the professional, structural eye your manuscript needs.
New to Fiverr, but 5+ years of industry training (CIEP), I'm an author and developmental editor specializing in fantasy, from romantasy and dark fantasy to epic and high fantasy, including YA, thriller, and mystery. I help authors turn promising drafts into compelling, cohesive stories that keep readers hooked.
This is not a grammar or line edit. Developmental editing focuses on the foundation of your story.
What I'll review:
- Plot structure and pacing
- Character arcs, motivation, and consistency
- Worldbuilding logic and immersion
- Stakes, tension, and conflict
- Theme and narrative focus
- Genre expectations and reader engagement
What you'll receive:
- Detailed editorial report
- Actionable revision suggestions
- In-line comments in your manuscript
- Honest, constructive, and author-focused feedback - no vague advice. I won't sugarcoat issues, but I'll show you how to fix them
If your manuscript is longer than the provided plans, feel free to reach out for a custom package.
I do not use AI for
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FAQ
Why should you choose me for feedback?
I am a self-published fantasy author with hands-on publishing experience. Trained in editing through CIEP and creative writing through Wesleyan University. I offer practical, story-first feedback tailored to genre expectations and real readers.
What is my experience level?
I am an experienced developmental editor with a strong track record of manuscript critiques and beta reads. Skilled at identifying plot, pacing, and character issues and delivering clear, actionable feedback that authors can immediately apply.
What is CIEP
The Chartered Institute of Editing and Proofreading (CIEP) is a UK chartered body offering respected training in proofreading, copyediting, and editorial practice. Its Royal Charter status marks it as a prestigious authority on professional standards in editing worldwide.
Do you also work with other genres?
Yes, apart from all fantasy genres, thriller, and mystery, I also enjoy dystopian and mythology.
