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I will alpha read ebook or novel
Book Editor and Manuscript Evaluator
"This is the 4th book Liv has worked on for me. The first 3 were bestsellers, one an award winner...'" Jack Lawrence
This what a client had to say about my work and I know you will too.
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About this Gig
Honest, Actionable Feedback to Shape Your Manuscript
Are you in the Alpha stage of writing your novel, memoir, or eBook? This is one of the most demanding parts of the writing journey, but you don't have to tackle it alone. I'm here to provide honest, objective feedback to help you develop your manuscript and move it to the next stage.
What You'll Get:
The Alpha stage varies for every writer, so I'll tailor my approach to your unique needs. As I read, I will:
- Share real-time reader reactions: What works, what confuses me, and standout moments.
- Highlight areas needing attention: Plot structure, pacing, character arcs, and overall story flow.
- Deliver a Readers Report: Key strengths, weaknesses, and actionable suggestions to guide your revisions.
Why Work With Me?
I provide supportive yet constructive feedback focused on helping you shape the best version of your story.
Important Notes:
- No spelling or grammar edits are included.
- Need a Beta Read? Check my other gig.
- Rush order? Message me to discuss your timeline.
Let's bring your manuscript closer to greatness message me today!
Genre:
Action
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Adventure
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Fanfiction
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Literary fiction
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Romance
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Fantasy
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
Clients I’ve worked with
Developmental editing and line editing for Ashley's debut romance novel. As a first-time author, Ashley needed not just edits but a collaborative guide through the full revision process. Delivered a detailed editorial report covering story structure, pacing, character development, and timeline continuity. Conducted a 1:1 call to walk through major revisions, mapped the full manuscript timeline, id
Nov 2025
Jack Lawrence
Beta reading & editing across all three of Jack's 2023 novels. All three became Amazon bestsellers; one won 1st place at The BookFest Awards. Delivered detailed edits, reader reaction notes, and growth-focused feedback. Jack has since committed to working with Liv on every future book.
Jun 2026
My Portfolio
FAQ
Can I look for specific things while you're reading?
If you have anything that you would like for me to keep a look out for specifically please let me know. You can place these items on the cover page of your work.
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M meganmills351
Canada
I loved working with Liv from start to finish! I think she really got me and what I was trying to accomplish with my manuscript and she gave me a perfect mix of positive feedback and construction criticism that I know will improve my story tenfold!
$50-$100
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?O oliviaszalanski
United States
She is a great communicator and extremely helpful. Would use her again!
Up to $50
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?N naomikelsey
United States
Hi, I found this very helpful. The turnaround was quick, and the points greatly helped me overhaul my first-draft pages into a more compelling structure and order. Thanks so much!
Up to $50
Price
2 days
Duration
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nicw2019
United Kingdom
Working with Liv met all of my expectations and beyond. Liv's feedback and suggestions were invaluable and helped me decide some pivotal changes that I had planned to put in place. Liv addressed every issue that I asked and more and provided invaluable insight and suggestions and I cannot wait to work...
Up to $50
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?C carrowbrown
United States
This is the alpha reader of my dreams. I am beyond floored by the feedback and attention to detail. I will be coming back for sure.
$50-$100
Price
3 weeks
Duration
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14 reviews for this Gig
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Most relevant
M meganmills351
Canada
I loved working with Liv from start to finish! I think she really got me and what I was trying to accomplish with my manuscript and she gave me a perfect mix of positive feedback and construction criticism that I know will improve my story tenfold!
$50-$100
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?O oliviaszalanski
United States
She is a great communicator and extremely helpful. Would use her again!
Up to $50
Price
7 days
Duration
Helpful?N naomikelsey
United States
Hi, I found this very helpful. The turnaround was quick, and the points greatly helped me overhaul my first-draft pages into a more compelling structure and order. Thanks so much!
Up to $50
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?N nicw2019
United Kingdom
Working with Liv met all of my expectations and beyond. Liv's feedback and suggestions were invaluable and helped me decide some pivotal changes that I had planned to put in place. Liv addressed every issue that I asked and more and provided invaluable insight and suggestions and I cannot wait to work...
Up to $50
Price
5 days
Duration
Helpful?C carrowbrown
United States
This is the alpha reader of my dreams. I am beyond floored by the feedback and attention to detail. I will be coming back for sure.
$50-$100
Price
3 weeks
Duration
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