I will be your professional beta reader for romance and thriller novels

Elevate your manuscript with professional insight!

Hi! I'm Lorena, a dedicated researcher and analytical reader. With a Master's in Political Science and a background in Social Work, I offer a unique, multicultural perspective to help you refine your story.

I specialize in Romance and Thrillers, where chemistry, pacing, and logic are everything. I provide honest, constructive, and actionable feedback from both a professional and a passionate reader's point of view.

What I will analyze:

• Character Arcs & Chemistry: Are the emotions believable and captivating?
• Pacing & Flow: Does the story grip the reader from page one?
• Plot Consistency: Are there any "plot holes" or logical gaps?
• Dialogue Realism: Do your characters sound authentic?
• Social Context: Analysis of social nuances and human behavior using my professional lens.

What you will receive:

A comprehensive Reader Report detailing my impressions, suggestions for improvement, and a summary of what is working perfectly.

Whether you are writing a spicy romance or a dark mystery, let's collaborate to make your book the best version of itself!

Note: I accept manuscripts in both English and Portuguese.