I will beta read and critique your novel or short story

Loreta Smith

France

I speak English, French

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I’m Loreta Smith, a professional screenwriter specializing in film, television, and creative storytelling. I transform ideas, outlines, and rough drafts into polished screenplays with compelling chara...
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About this Gig

Professional Fiction Beta Reader | Honest & Constructive Feedback


Have you finished your manuscript and need an honest readers perspective before publishing? I provide thoughtful, detailed beta reading for fiction authors across a range of genres.


I read your manuscript as a genuine reader, focusing on what works, what feels unclear, and where the story could become more engaging.


My feedback covers:

  • Plot, pacing & story flow
  • Character development & consistency
  • Dialogue & readability
  • Emotional impact
  • World-building & immersion
  • Overall reader experience


Youll receive:

  • In-document comments and reactions
  • Honest, constructive feedback
  • A detailed reader report
  • Clear suggestions for improvement


I work with Microsoft Word or Google Docs and provide feedback tailored to your manuscript and goals.


Fiction manuscripts only. Please message me before ordering if your manuscript exceeds 100k words.

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Genre:

Action

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Children’s books

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Cookbooks/ recipes

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Language:

English

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German

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