I will write encouraging, industry quality script notes

5.0
5.0

United Kingdom

I speak English

228 orders completed

Gig Summary

Screenwriting and Script Coverage

Hello — I’m Lorna! I’m a London-based screenwriter and script editor, currently writing across TV, film, theatre and games. Alongside my own work, I’ve spent years working in professional development...
About this Gig

THE GIG


Sometimes, when you've lived with a script for weeks, months (or years!), it becomes impossible to see it clearly. Thats where a fresh pair of eyes can be invaluable.


My coverage is thorough, constructive and writer-focused, including a personal letter, overarching notes and act-by-act breakdown, covering character, structure, dialogue, pacing and tone.


Scripts are welcome at any stage, from messy first drafts to polished twentieths. My job isn't to tell you how I would write your story, but to understand what you're trying to achieve and make sure you get there.


And please reach out! Im a friendly face and am always happy to chat about your projects as you process the notes and continue into drafting.


PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE


Im a London-based screenwriter and script editor with experience across development, writers rooms and production. I spent several years script editing for a showrunner on projects for Sky, Paramount+, Sundance Channel, Bad Wolf and ITV, and have worked as a Hollywood script reader for a major studio.


EDUCATION


  • MFA Screenwriting National Film & Television School, London
  • BA Screenwriting Emerson College, Boston

Language:

English

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Reviews

148 reviews for this Gig
5.0

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Rating Breakdown
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    5
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    5
  • Value of delivery
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    sevsquad

    US

    United States

    5

    Lorna did a great job taking my super early rough draft and giving me some great ideas on how I could move forward to develop the project into something that can stand out. Also had a great eye for detail, noting Formatting issues I had missed and little confusions caused by my first edit. Would recommend!

    $100-$200

    Price

    10 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • M

    mjdr553

    US

    United States

    5

    Knows what it takes to make a great script.

    $50-$100

    Price

    11 days

    Duration

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    davidrothmanva

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    Once again Lorna came through with insightful, detailed suggestions. I’ll of course continue hiring her for more work on this project and others. Great communication.

    $100-$200

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • D
    image-docs

    darcymcneil

    CA

    Canada

    5

    Lorna takes a genuine interest in the material and offers deep structural insights and provides of breadth of feedback touching on all aspects of the material. I trust her with my material, and know it is what I need to make it better.

    $100-$200

    Price

    13 days

    Duration

    Worksample image
    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • D
    image-docs

    davidrothmanva

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    Lorna read the script carefully and wrote thoughtful, honest, constructive comments in a professional format. A true pro. I’d certainly use her again.

    $100-$200

    Price

    10 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
Reviews

148 reviews for this Gig
5.0

(146)
(2)
(0)
(0)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    5
  • Value of delivery
    4.9
Sort By
Most relevant
  • S

    sevsquad

    US

    United States

    5

    Lorna did a great job taking my super early rough draft and giving me some great ideas on how I could move forward to develop the project into something that can stand out. Also had a great eye for detail, noting Formatting issues I had missed and little confusions caused by my first edit. Would recommend!

    $100-$200

    Price

    10 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • M

    mjdr553

    US

    United States

    5

    Knows what it takes to make a great script.

    $50-$100

    Price

    11 days

    Duration

    Worksample image
    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • D
    image-docs

    davidrothmanva

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    Once again Lorna came through with insightful, detailed suggestions. I’ll of course continue hiring her for more work on this project and others. Great communication.

    $100-$200

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • D
    image-docs

    darcymcneil

    CA

    Canada

    5

    Lorna takes a genuine interest in the material and offers deep structural insights and provides of breadth of feedback touching on all aspects of the material. I trust her with my material, and know it is what I need to make it better.

    $100-$200

    Price

    13 days

    Duration

    Worksample image
    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • D
    image-docs

    davidrothmanva

    US

    United States

    Ongoing collaboration
    5

    Lorna read the script carefully and wrote thoughtful, honest, constructive comments in a professional format. A true pro. I’d certainly use her again.

    $100-$200

    Price

    10 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No