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I will be a romance beta reader, dark romance beta reader, horror,romantasy beta reader
Developmental Editor, Creative Writing and Book Beta Reader
I’m Louise, a Creative Writer, book Beta Reader and Editor with a BA (Hons) in Falmouth University. For the past 4 years, I have been offering beta reading services within writing circles and professi...
About this Gig
Many dark romance manuscripts lack the necessary chemistry, horror stories miss the chilling edge, and romantasy world-building often feels flat. Writing in these intense genres is incredibly challenging, and it is difficult to know if your story truly grips the reader or stalls out in the middle.
I solve this problem by analyzing your manuscript through the lens of your exact target audience, identifying precisely where the pacing drops, where the tension slips, and how to make your tropes hit harder.
What you will get:
- Honest reader reactions on plot twists and character chemistry
- Detailed notes on pacing, world-building, and atmospheric tension
- A clear summary report highlighting what works and what needs polish
What I offer:
- In-depth inline comments
- Clear feedback on what works and what doesn't
- Practical suggestions for improvement
- Honest, constructive criticism
- A personalized approach tailored to your story
- Fast turnaround
Genres I work with:
- Fantasy
- Romance
- Mystery / Thriller
- Science Fiction
- Historical Fiction
- Contemporary Fiction
- Humour/Entertainment
- Self help
Let's make your manuscript unputdownable.
Select your package or send me a message today to get started!
Language:
English
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German
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
Do you accept custom word counts?
Yes. If your manuscript doesn’t fit the packages, message me for a custom offer tailored to your exact word count.
What format should I send my manuscript in?
Please send your work as a Microsoft Word document (.docx) so I can easily add inline comments.
Will you share my story with anyone else?
Never. Your work is 100% confidential, secure, and stays entirely protected with me.
Do you offer proofreading or editing?
No. This service focuses strictly on reader experience, pacing, plot, and character feedback, not grammar corrections.
Can you handle explicit or graphic content?
Yes. I am fully comfortable with dark themes, explicit romance, triggers, and intense horror elements.
