I will edit your query letter or submission package

Hi there! I'm Louise, an agented author and freelance editor.

The submission process to literary agents is an exhausting and frustrating one. I have been through it myself hundreds of times. I cringe when I look back on my very first queries...then I learned how to write a professional query and I started getting requests for full manuscripts.

Agents are very busy people and they are looking for any small reason to auto-reject your submission. Obviously, I cannot guarantee that this gig will get you an agent as so much has to align; whether the manuscript itself is to that agent's taste, whether they have a full list, etc, but I can help you craft a query that will give them less reason to auto-reject you.

The synopsis is also a difficult piece of writing to master. I will take a look at your synopsis and line edit it/ suggest ways to improve it.

In my premium package, I will also look at your first chapter, as that needs to immediately grab the agent's attention in the very first paragraph, to avoid one of those pesky auto-rejections!

**I do not have any experience with picture books so unfortunately cannot help with those!**

Thanks for looking.