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I will beta read and critique your novel promptly and in depth
Gig Summary
beta reader, proofreader, author
Hi! My name is Louise, and I have a long history beta-reading and proofreading published novels and novellas.
As an author, I understand the novel-writing process and want to help you make your man...
What people loved about this freelancer
fpk100
United States
Louise does a great job analyzing my work and providing honest, professional feedback on everything from plot to character development and everything in between....
rjfriend
United States
I was sooo many edits into my draft I couldn't see straight. Louise helped me understand what was working and what wasn't. Her feedback was very supportive and constructive. I would definitely work with her again.,
crystaljohns864
United States
Louise is exceptional, this is my third time working with her. Her in line notes and reader reactions are always insightful and detailed. I will continue to reach out with future projects.
About this Gig
With a focus on plotting, pace, characters, world-building, and tone, I will read your manuscript and supply thorough feedback with an overall write-up, along with inline notes throughout the text (if a google or word doc is supplied). The reader report will be detailed, looking from both a reader and author perspective. I will also make use of the google doc or word commenting feature to leave my reactions as I go along, and correct any grammar or spelling issues I spot.
My feedback will be detailed, and I will include comments on:
- Individual Character Impressions
- Plotting: flow, pacing, twists, interest
- World-building/ Setting: not just for fantasy, discussions of the world you have created around your characters
- Writing Style: including advice on improvements and a line edit
- Tone: does it fit the genre? Is your voice/ your characters voice strong?
- Overview: including strengths/ weaknesses and brief summary
- Any particular questions you have
I read manuscripts of all fiction genres and lengths (no non-fiction), just get in touch if you'd like to confirm we're a good fit.
*NO AI please*
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
My word count is over 70,000 words, can I still order with you?
Yes, of course, just get in touch. I'm happy to read longer works.
How do I supply my manuscript?
You can send me a copy of the word docx or a google doc link. I prefer working with word doc to make use of the inline comments feature, but I'm flexible.
What will your feedback look like?
Along with the inline comments, I supply a report that will typically be broken down as follows: CHARACTERS PLOT/PACING WORLD BUILDING WRITING STYLE GENERAL COMMENTS Each section will include detailed notes, and I will add other sections if I feel it's necessary.
What genres do you read?
I'm happy to read all genres apart from memoirs/non-fiction and anything overtly religious. Including 18+ and trigger heavy works. Just drop me a message if you aren't sure.
My manuscript is fiction, but not a novel, can we work together?
Please get in touch first if your work is something other than a novel, for example a script or poetry.
Will you read works written by AI?
Absolutely not, I am very against generative AI in creative spaces and won't be a good fit for you.
Reviews
488 reviews for this Gig
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F fpk100
United States
Louise does a great job analyzing my work and providing honest, professional feedback on everything from plot to character development and everything in between. Her comments are always spot on, and I've loved collaborating with her for the third time now. I'll be back again for the next book in the series.
$100-$200
Price
4 weeks
Duration
Helpful?R rjfriend
United States
I was sooo many edits into my draft I couldn't see straight. Louise helped me understand what was working and what wasn't. Her feedback was very supportive and constructive. I would definitely work with her again.,
$100-$200
Price
5 weeks
Duration
Helpful?C crystaljohns864
United States
Louise is exceptional, this is my third time working with her. Her in line notes and reader reactions are always insightful and detailed. I will continue to reach out with future projects.
$100-$200
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?D david_writes4u
United States
Once again, provided insightful and detailed feedback. 10/10 🙂
$100-$200
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?U unreal_jasmine
Denmark
I really appreciated the feedback. Extremely quick (250 pages in less than a week with annotations all the way through). Many good points throughout, both in the annotations and in the reader report. Responded quickly and in depth to the questions that arose as I read her comments.
$200-$400
Price
10 days
Duration
Helpful?
Reviews
488 reviews for this Gig
| (475) | ||
| (11) | ||
| (2) | ||
| (0) | ||
| (0) |
Rating Breakdown
- Seller communication level
- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
Sort By
Most relevant
F fpk100
United States
Louise does a great job analyzing my work and providing honest, professional feedback on everything from plot to character development and everything in between. Her comments are always spot on, and I've loved collaborating with her for the third time now. I'll be back again for the next book in the series.
$100-$200
Price
4 weeks
Duration
Helpful?R rjfriend
United States
I was sooo many edits into my draft I couldn't see straight. Louise helped me understand what was working and what wasn't. Her feedback was very supportive and constructive. I would definitely work with her again.,
$100-$200
Price
5 weeks
Duration
Helpful?C crystaljohns864
United States
Louise is exceptional, this is my third time working with her. Her in line notes and reader reactions are always insightful and detailed. I will continue to reach out with future projects.
$100-$200
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?D david_writes4u
United States
Once again, provided insightful and detailed feedback. 10/10 🙂
$100-$200
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?U unreal_jasmine
Denmark
I really appreciated the feedback. Extremely quick (250 pages in less than a week with annotations all the way through). Many good points throughout, both in the annotations and in the reader report. Responded quickly and in depth to the questions that arose as I read her comments.
$200-$400
Price
10 days
Duration
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