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I will fix your novel s first chapter booktok style to hook readers instantly
BookTok Romance Beta Reader and Emotional Story Analyst
Digital marketing strategist, copywriter, and former professional photographer with +10 years of experience.
I have a strong background in visual storytelling and viral content, with hands-on experien...
About this Gig
Hi! I specialize in first chapters that hook readers instantly.
If your opening doesnt grab attention, readers wont continueno matter how strong the rest of your story is. I help you fix that by focusing on what truly matters: engagement, emotional impact, and pacing.
What youll get:
- clear feedback on your hook and opening effectiveness
- analysis of pacing, tension, and reader engagement
- insight into emotional impact and chemistry
- identification of weak spots and missed opportunities
- actionable suggestions to improve your first chapter
This service is designed to help you create an opening that feels addictive, compelling, and hard to put down.
Perfect for:
romance authors, slow burn, spicy, dark romance, and BookTok-oriented stories.
Important:
This is not full editing. I focus on reader experience, emotional response, and narrative strength.
If you want your story to capture attention from page one, this is for you.
Language:
English
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Italian
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
Do you edit grammar or spelling?
No. I focus on emotional impact, reader experience, and engagement—not grammar editing.
What genres do you accept?
Romance only (including dark, spicy, slow burn, enemies to lovers, etc.).
Can you read full manuscripts?
Yes, but please message me first for custom offers.
Do you rewrite my chapter?
I provide suggestions and optional sample rewrites (Premium).
Is this editing?
No, this focuses on hook, pacing, and reader engagement.
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L lieslgray
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Lucia reviewed the first two chapters of my fantasy novel (the first for each of my two POVs), and pointed out several structural and tension issues that I think were spot on but that previous beta readers hadn't commented on. Positive feedback was also provided to show where the story is working well....
$50-$100
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L lieslgray
United States
Lucia reviewed the first two chapters of my fantasy novel (the first for each of my two POVs), and pointed out several structural and tension issues that I think were spot on but that previous beta readers hadn't commented on. Positive feedback was also provided to show where the story is working well....
$50-$100
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?
