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I will critique your novel and provide development feedback
Professional Beta Reader And Manuscript Analyst
Hello! I'm Lucas, a dedicated story analyst and beta reader specializing in fiction manuscripts. Over the years, I have helped independent authors refine their pacing, polish character arcs, and fix c...
About this Gig
Need professional developmental feedback on your novel?
I'll provide a detailed developmental critique to help you strengthen your manuscript before publication.
My feedback focuses on:
- Story structure
- Plot and pacing
- Character development
- Dialogue
- Point of view
- Story consistency
- Overall reader experience
You'll receive a detailed report with constructive, actionable feedback to help improve your novel.
Please note: This gig provides developmental feedback only and does not include proofreading, copyediting, or line editing (except were included in your package).
Feel free to contact me before placing an order.
Language:
English
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French
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
What is a developmental critique?
A developmental critique focuses on the overall story, including structure, pacing, characters, plot, dialogue, and areas that need improvement.
What genres do you accept?
I accept most fiction genres. If you're unsure whether your novel is a good fit, feel free to message me before ordering.
Do you proofread or copyedit?
No. This gig focuses on developmental feedback rather than grammar or spelling corrections.
What will I receive?
You'll receive a detailed critique report with practical suggestions to strengthen your manuscript.
