I will beta read your fantasy or sci fi manuscript

Lucas Thorne

United States

I speak English, French

Professional Beta Reader And Manuscript Analyst

Hello! I'm Lucas, a dedicated story analyst and beta reader specializing in fiction manuscripts. Over the years, I have helped independent authors refine their pacing, polish character arcs, and fix c...
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About this Gig

Hey there!

I'm Lucas Thorne, a dedicated beta reader specializing in fantasy and sci-fi manuscripts.

  • Wondering if your world-building feels immersive?
  • Is your plot keeping readers engaged?
  • Do your characters and pacing work as well as they could?


You've come to the right place!


What can I do?

  • Review plot and story structure
  • Analyze pacing and story flow
  • Evaluate character development
  • Check world-building and consistency
  • Identify confusing or weak sections
  • Share honest reader reactions
  • Highlight strengths and improvement areas
  • Provide clear, actionable feedback

Why me?

  • Honest and constructive feedback
  • Detail-oriented reading
  • Reader-focused perspective
  • Professional communication
  • Your manuscript is treated with care and confidentiality


Ready to get started? Send me your manuscript, word count, and any specific concerns you'd like me to focus on. I'll provide thoughtful feedback designed to help strengthen your fantasy or sci-fi story.


Note:

Please message me before ordering so we can confirm your manuscript and the package that best fits your needs.

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Genre:

Literary fiction

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Mystery

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Philosophy

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Science fiction

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Fantasy

Language:

English

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