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I will review your game narrative and ludonarrative design
About this Gig
I will review a small slice of your indie game's narrative and player experience.
Send up to 1,000 words, one short design brief, or up to 10 minutes of gameplay. You receive a concise written diagnostic identifying what is working, where story, systems, and player expectations drift apart, and the least disruptive corrections I recommend.
We call this a White Chalk Report.
This is an affordable first look, not a full script, game design document, or rewrite. Larger worlds, dialogue, quests, and implementation work can be scoped through Fiverr.
Instagram Index and authorship: Delta State Solutions permits AI only for limited technical help comparable to applying a photo filter, correcting a margin, or formatting a document. It does not author the creative work. The review, editorial judgment, and final deliverable are human-authored and checked for provenance.
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
What is the Instagram Index?
The Instagram Index is Delta State Solutions’ human-authorship standard. AI may assist only with limited technical work comparable to applying a photo filter, correcting a margin, or formatting a document. It may not author creative work. Editorial judgment and the delivered review remain human-auth
How fast do you work?
Very fast, I have highly efficient workflows honed from crisis journalism and intimate experience inside and outside the video game industry in a creative role.
Do you offer additional services?
Yes, to be discussed after a successful pilot establishes we are both on the side of the Republic and not Clankers.
