Browse categories
Explore
Fiverr Pro
English
$
USD
I will beta read your romance manuscript with detailed feedback
About this Gig
Hi! I'm Luna, a beta reader specializing in Romance and New Adult. I love diving into stories of love, tension, and characters that stay with us long after the last page, and that's exactly what I bring to your manuscript.
My focus is helping you see what's working and what still has room to grow. I give honest, detailed structural feedback on plot, pacing, character arcs, and emotional coherence, and I flag errors and inconsistencies that might pull the reader out of the story (timeline slips, out-of-character behavior, loose ends).
You'll receive a clear, constructive report highlighting what works, along with concrete suggestions for what could be stronger, always with respect for your voice and vision.
I read in both English and Portuguese, so whichever language your manuscript is in, I've got you covered.
I'm just getting started on Fiverr, but reading is my daily habit, not a side interest. I get through 2 to 5 books a month, so I know these genres inside out and exactly what keeps a reader turning pages. You'll get that same instinct and dedication poured into your manuscript.
Looking for an attentive reader who loves the genre and takes your work seriously? Let's talk!
Genre:
Fanfiction
•
Romance
•
Fantasy
Language:
English
•
Portuguese
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What genres do you read?
My specialty is Romance and New Adult, but I'm open to other genres too. Send me a message with your genre and, depending on what it is, I may be happy to read it. Just ask before ordering!
Do you accept projects over 60,000 words?
Yes! There's no fixed limit. For manuscripts larger than 60,000 words, just message me first and we'll agree on a custom quote and timeline.
Do you use AI in your reviews?
No. Every report is written by me, based on my own reading. You get a real reader's genuine reaction.
What format should I send my manuscript in?
Google Docs or Word are preferred, so I can leave comments directly in the document. PDF works too if you just want the report.
Do you write inline comments?
Yes! I leave notes directly in your manuscript WHERE RELEVANT, plus a separate written report with my overall feedback.
How big is the report I'll receive?
It depends on the package: around 1 page for Basic, up to 5 pages for Premium. Either way, it's clear and focused, no filler.
Is my manuscript safe with you?
Absolutely. I never share your manuscript with anyone, in any form. Your work stays private.
Will your feedback be honest?
Always. I'll be kind and constructive, but I won't sugarcoat. Honest feedback is the whole point of a beta reader, and it's how your story gets stronger.
Do you offer proofreading or line/copy editing?
No. I'm a beta reader, so I focus on the reader's experience: plot, pacing, characters, and inconsistencies. I don't correct grammar/spelling or rewrite passages. For that, you'll want a proofreader or copy editor.
Can I message you before ordering?
Of course! Feel free to reach out with your genre, word count, and any questions before placing an order.
