I will beta read your story and give extensive feedback

4.9
4.9

Brazil

I speak English, Portuguese, Spanish

75 orders completed

Gig Summary

beta reader and writing editor

I’m an avid reader and fiction enthusiast, currently majoring in psychology, which fuels my natural curiosity and taste for the peculiar.

Level 2

Has met high performance criteria and has a proven track record for meeting client expectations.

What people loved about this freelancer

About this Gig

I offer thoughtful feedback focused on character psychology, emotional impact, relationship dynamics, pacing, tension, story logic, and the deeper architecture of your manuscript. I welcome first-time writers, indie authors, fanfiction writers, passion projects, and authors preparing to revise or publish. I'm open to rough drafts, polished manuscripts, and early-stage projects that need clearer direction.

My feedback will address:

  • Central conflicts and themes
  • Plot holes, inconsistencies, and story logic
  • Pacing, confusing or underdeveloped passages
  • Character motivation, believability, growth, and likeability
  • Romantic chemistry, intimacy, and emotional payoff
  • Relationship dynamics, dialogue, atmosphere, and engagement
  • Worldbuilding, magic systems, lore, and consistency

What to expect from my reports: My reports are in-depth and academically styled, a literary and thematic analysis that reads more like an essay than a checklist. Every point and question you submit is fully addressed, but woven into the analysis throughout the report. Expect several pages. If you're looking for short, direct, bullet-point feedback, my style likely isn't the match you need.

Genre:

Adventure

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Horror/ thriller

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Mystery

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Romance

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Science fiction

Language:

English

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Portuguese

Delivery style preference

Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.

Reviews

59 reviews for this Gig
4.9

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(1)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    4.9
  • Quality of delivery
    4.9
  • Value of delivery
    4.9
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    dunklenoise

    US

    United States

    5

    I wish I could give a 10 star review. From the very first chat with Maisa the experience was very professional and honest. She wasn't trying to sell me anything. She told me that my book was outside her usual genre. But she explained simply how she would approach it and let me decide. And I am so glad...

    $50-$100

    Price

    4 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • R
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    rlm1716

    US

    United States

    5

    Working with Maisa was a great experience! She was kind and communicative and went above and beyond in her beta reading of my work. I was a bit nervous to share this story, as it has a lot of personal beats, but Maisa treated all of this with care and pointed out aspects of the storytelling and themes...

    $100-$200

    Price

    2 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
    1 person found this review helpful.
  • N

    natasha_tyndale

    GB

    United Kingdom

    5

    Maisa provided me with an extremely detailed breakdown and analysis of my manuscript, looking at the themes, plot, character, psychological aspects, effectiveness, and coherence of my story. She provided textual references to what aspects of her work she saw in other media to help me place my story....

    $50-$100

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • D
    image-docs

    diegotanton

    US

    United States

    5

    Maisa went above and beyond with her beta read. Her report was incredibly thorough, insightful, and full of specific, actionable feedback on everything from character arcs and pacing to worldbuilding and deeper themes. It was clear she genuinely engaged with the story and took the time to understand...

    $100-$200

    Price

    4 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • L

    lightwilder

    GB

    United Kingdom

    5

    Wow! Thank you so much, Maisa! This was intensely detailed and unbelievably valuable! You really went above and beyond! I am actually super excited to start editing things in ways I had no idea needed it and now you've pointed it out - boom, lightbulb moment! To anyone who wants a really deep, perceptive...

    $50-$100

    Price

    2 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
Reviews

59 reviews for this Gig
4.9

(58)
(0)
(0)
(0)
(1)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    4.9
  • Quality of delivery
    4.9
  • Value of delivery
    4.9
Sort By
Most relevant
  • D

    dunklenoise

    US

    United States

    5

    I wish I could give a 10 star review. From the very first chat with Maisa the experience was very professional and honest. She wasn't trying to sell me anything. She told me that my book was outside her usual genre. But she explained simply how she would approach it and let me decide. And I am so glad...

    $50-$100

    Price

    4 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • R
    image-docs

    rlm1716

    US

    United States

    5

    Working with Maisa was a great experience! She was kind and communicative and went above and beyond in her beta reading of my work. I was a bit nervous to share this story, as it has a lot of personal beats, but Maisa treated all of this with care and pointed out aspects of the storytelling and themes...

    $100-$200

    Price

    2 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
    1 person found this review helpful.
  • N

    natasha_tyndale

    GB

    United Kingdom

    5

    Maisa provided me with an extremely detailed breakdown and analysis of my manuscript, looking at the themes, plot, character, psychological aspects, effectiveness, and coherence of my story. She provided textual references to what aspects of her work she saw in other media to help me place my story....

    $50-$100

    Price

    3 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • D
    image-docs

    diegotanton

    US

    United States

    5

    Maisa went above and beyond with her beta read. Her report was incredibly thorough, insightful, and full of specific, actionable feedback on everything from character arcs and pacing to worldbuilding and deeper themes. It was clear she genuinely engaged with the story and took the time to understand...

    $100-$200

    Price

    4 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • L

    lightwilder

    GB

    United Kingdom

    5

    Wow! Thank you so much, Maisa! This was intensely detailed and unbelievably valuable! You really went above and beyond! I am actually super excited to start editing things in ways I had no idea needed it and now you've pointed it out - boom, lightbulb moment! To anyone who wants a really deep, perceptive...

    $50-$100

    Price

    2 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No