I will be your script doctor

United States

I speak English, Italian

I blend creativity and strategy to bring your vision to life!

Hi, I’m Maleek Mayers—a writer/producer and script doctor. I deliver clear, actionable notes to improve structure, character, dialogue, pacing, and endings, plus loglines that sell the concept. Expect...

About this Gig

Need honest, actionable script notes that actually help you rewrite? Ill read your screenplay and give you clear, professional feedback on whats working, what isnt, and exactly how to fix it.

What I focus on

Story & structure (setup, turning points, payoff)
Character (goals, flaws, arc, relationships)
Dialogue (voice, subtext, realism)
Pacing, stakes, clarity, and tone
Ending impact + overall marketability

What youll receive

A refined logline
Written notes with prioritized fixes (so you know what to do next)
Story solutions and optionsnot vague commentary

Packages

Basic: quick script feedback + improved logline
Standard: full coverage + deeper notes + plot development guidance
Premium: deep script doctor pass + rewrite roadmap (beat plan) + plot development

Important

Scripts must be submitted in standard screenplay format (PDF preferred).
Revisions cover clarification and minor adjustments to notesnot a full re-read of a new draft.
If your script exceeds the package page limit, please add Additional Pages at checkout.

Send your script + genre + what you want feedback on most, and Ill take it from there.